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Date Posted: 21:40:29 06/21/01 Thu
Author: cindy
Subject:

whoa! i mean how could u stop there? more, more please, i need another dose! btw, chapter 9 was wow!
In reply to: Andrea 's message, "DANCE WITH LIFE -- Chapter 10" on 12:23:18 06/21/01 Thu

>CHAPTER 10 �
>
>If there was ever a moment when time stood still, this
>had to be it. The night was so warm that tiny drops
>of sweat covered their foreheads. The intensity in
>the room could have been sliced with a kitchen knife.
>Robin and Jason both stood, immobile, as their eyes
>locked and somehow refused to let go. There was such
>a peaceful silence reigning in the house that they
>both felt like they were alone in the world � or in an
>entirely different world altogether.
>
>Robin felt her heart suddenly stop. Why did she come
>downstairs? Most importantly, why wasn�t going back
>up? These questions merely had time to register in
>her brain before she decided to completely dismiss
>them.
>
>Jason sat up, never leaving her out of his sight. She
>took his breath away. Standing there, in the
>semi-dark stairs, in a pair of shorts and a white,
>fitting t-shirt, he was reminded of just how beautiful
>she truly was. Not that he needed any specific
>reminders. All he had to do was close his eyes.
>Robin took a step forward, just as Jason stood up.
>She stopped, while her eyes automatically travelled to
>his bare chest. She nearly slapped herself mentally
>for letting herself do so. It�s not like she hadn�t
>seen Jason bare-chested, in a pair of jeans before.
>That�s what she had to keep telling herself.
>
>�Hey�� Jason said in a rather rusty voice.
>
>�Hey�� she said back, as her eyes fell upon the yellow
>helmet, resting on the small living room table.
>
>Robin smiled to herself and took a few steps forward,
>while Jason caught what she was now looking at.
>
>�Looks like your plant died after all.� She said with
>a regretful expression.
>
>Jason looked at t he hat and restrained himself from
>sighing once again.
>
>�Maybe if I had paid more attention�� he said as he
>turned to face Robin.
>
>They both stared at each other quickly and then Robin
>grimaced, funnily.
>
>�I don�t think it�s that.� She said as she sat on the
>couch, comfortably. �I think it might have been
>everything else, though.� Robin smiled.
>
>Jason sat down beside her on the couch and smiled to
>himself. Were they still talking about the plant? He
>couldn�t be sure. They both stayed silent for a
>little while and stared at the helmet. Then, Jason
>finally reached for it and took it in his hands.
>
>�What are you still doing with it?� Robin finally
>asked, leaning back into the couch.
>
>�I�m not sure.� He honestly replied, taking a deep
>breath.
>
>�It seems like such a long time ago�� she said calmly.
>
>�It does.� He replied, suddenly looking a bit
>uncomfortable.
>
>Robin sensed it and sat up straight.
>
>�I can�� she began, searching for his eyes. �I can
>leave if you want me to.� She then offered.
>
>�Do you want to leave?� he asked her in returned.
>
>�That�s not what I asked.�
>
>�Well, you didn�t ask anything. You offered.� He
>rectified.
>
>�Slightly the same, in this case.� Robin answered as
>they both paused, waiting.
>
>Waiting for what? They weren�t exactly sure. Robin
>suddenly got up and stepped away from the couch,
>closer to the terrace doors.
>
>�Why are we doing this?� she softly asked, followed by
>a sigh.
>
>�Doing what?� Jason got up as well.
>
>�This.� She pointedly said. �Doing this. Why do we
>keep doing this, right here� I thought�� she quickly
>said before her voice trailed off.
>
>�You thought what?�
>
>Robin looked into his eyes and then withdrew her
>glance.
>
>�It doesn�t matter what I thought.� She said as she
>pushed the doors open and stepped out to feel the
>cooling, refreshing breeze brush against her face.
>
>--
>
>Anna sat on her bed, seemingly lost in her thoughts.
>The heat of the night was keeping her awake. She
>didn�t seem to know how to position herself in order
>to actually fall asleep. It was one of those humid
>summer nights.
>
>She looked around the room and couldn�t help but feel
>how peaceful this house was. It was so quiet,
>especially now, in the middle of the night. There was
>such a calming feeling to this place. She could
>almost hear the ocean and its midnight waves.
>
>She looked at the opened door and saw Sonny standing
>in the corridor.
>
>�Can�t sleep, huh?� she teased with a smile.
>
>�Looks like I�m not the only one.� He said, leaning
>against the doorframe.
>
>�I hate being stuck in bed like that�� she said with a
>sigh of frustration.
>
>�I�d never have guessed.� He grinned, amused by how
>similar to Robin she was.
>
>Anna shot him one of those looks and Sonny went back
>to being serious.
>
>�Have you seen Robin?� Anna then asked with motherly
>concern in her eyes.
>
>�Yeah,� Sonny replied as he took a deep breath.
>�She�s out on the terrace�with Jason.� He told her,
>waiting for her reaction.
>
>Anna nodded, in silence, as she lowered her eyes,
>thoughtfully.
>
>�I was just about to get some cold � very cold �
>water.� Sonny added, kindly. �Feel free to join me.�
>He offered.
>
>�You�ve got ice?� she asked, teasingly.
>
>�Oh, the best ice you�ll ever taste.� He added, amused.
>
>�Oh and so humble on top of everything.� She said,
>raising an eyebrow.
>
>--
>
>Robin crossed her arms across her chest and closed her
>eyes, feeling the breeze blowing through her hair.
>Jason watched from the doorway for a short while
>before stepping out onto the terrace to join her. He
>slowly walked towards her but she didn�t turn around
>to face him. She kept staring into the night.
>
>�Robin, what�s wrong?� Jason asked her, slowly.
>
>�Nothing�� she said, exasperatingly. �Nothing. It�s
>just�� she started and finally turned to face him. �I
>am grateful that you and Sonny want to help us. I
>really am.� She said and then paused in front of an
>attentive Jason.
>
>�But�?� Jason whispered, knowing that there was more
>on Robin�s mind than gratefulness.
>
>�But, this� This is not right, Jason. We can�t keep
>doing this.� She said in a heartbreaking voice.
>
>�Robin�� Jason tried to tell her but she didn�t let
>him finish.
>
>�No.� she almost ordered him in a much stronger and
>louder voice. �No. Don�t.� she took a deep breath and
>ran her right hand through her hair. �You know what
>keeps popping into my head, Jason?� she asked, not
>exactly waiting for an answer on his part. �That
>night on the bridge. All this time, that�s the last
>thing I remember. Standing on this bridge when you
>walked away.� She said, loud enough so he wouldn�t
>miss any part of it.
>
>There was a mix of sadness and frustration in her
>voice. Jason turned away from her, silently, and
>stared into the distance.
>
>�You said you never wanted to see my face again.� She
>reminded him, seriously. �Those were your words.� She
>said and Jason closed his eyes in pain. �Yet, for
>some reason, ever since I�ve been back, you�ve been
>everywhere.� She spoke, painfully. �We can�t bump
>into each other. We can�t sit down and talk as if
>nothing ever happened. We can�t do that, Jason� I
>can�t do it. You said you never wanted to see me
>again, and I thought I was fine with that. But here
>you are. Why are you here, Jason??� she finally said
>in a breaking voice. �We broke up� We broke up!� she
>exclaimed as if it finally dawned upon her. �Why are
>you here?� she repeated, emotionally.
>
>�Robin�� Jason started but his voice trailed off as he
>kept his back turned on her.
>
>�You let me go, Jason! You asked me to go�� she said,
>confused, but Jason interrupted her.
>
>�Because I was mad at you, not because I didn�t love
>you�!� he said as he turned to face her.
>
>There. He said it.
>
>He felt his heart stop in his chest as Robin stared
>into his eyes. With these words, he had brought the
>entire conversation to a dramatic halt. They both
>stood there, quietly, looking at each other,
>speechless.
>
>-----------------
>
>So?? Let me know what you thought! Want more??
>Andrea

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i cannot believe you stopped THERE! LOL! please update this INCREDIBLE story soon! (NT) -- Court :), 06:26:16 06/22/01 Fri

LOL sorry...I'm a cliffhanger junkie I guess LOL I'll have more up soon. (NT) -- Andrea, 19:14:05 06/22/01 Fri