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Subject: )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( Author: Vance [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 18:19:05 01/22/03 Wed The cup is not half empty as pessimists say As far as he sees nothing's left in the cup A whole cup full of nothing for him to indulge Since the voice of ambition has long since been shut up A singer, a writer, he's not dreaming now of going nowhere He gave heed to nothing, and all that he was... Is just a tragedy So he voyages in circles Succeeds getting nowhere And submits to the substance That first got him there Then in violent, frustration he cries out to God or just no one Is there a point to this madness and all that he was... Is just a tragedy He feels alone His heart in his hand He's alone He feels alone I feel... Then on that last day he breaks And he stood tall And he yelled...and he takes his life The young man of sixteen wanders along the beach. Dark emerald eyes flickering with anger. Anger he tried so hard to hold deep with in himself. It wasn't just about how Katelyn acted any more. The blame went directly to his father. Hands were clenched within his baggy jeans. Finally, he came to a stop and turned towards ocean. Gazing out into the never ending dark waters. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date ~Kamali'I~ Keiki 18:27:01 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:35:20 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~" -- Kei, 18:44:40 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:50:02 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:54:57 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:01:51 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:05:06 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:17:46 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:23:35 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:30:33 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:37:05 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:42:39 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:45:59 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:51:57 01/22/03 Wed ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:56:59 01/22/03 Wed )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 07:33:51 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 09:44:00 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 11:00:24 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 11:05:11 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 14:40:29 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 14:47:05 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 14:54:32 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 15:03:40 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 16:41:37 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 16:47:15 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:07:20 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:14:08 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:18:57 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:22:03 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:25:49 01/23/03 Thu ~God of the dead~ -- Anubis, 18:31:02 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:38:47 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:42:48 01/23/03 Thu ~God of the dead~ -- Anubis, 18:47:30 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:51:17 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 20:03:11 01/23/03 Thu ~God of the dead~ -- Anubis, 20:10:29 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 20:15:48 01/23/03 Thu ~God of the dead~ -- Anubis, 20:16:51 01/23/03 Thu )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 20:22:36 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 20:35:56 01/23/03 Thu ~God of the dead~ -- Anubis, 20:40:10 01/23/03 Thu ± Let | It | Go ± -- Armand, 20:50:48 01/23/03 Thu ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 09:27:58 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:30:46 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:37:46 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 18:48:01 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 18:57:54 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:13:14 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:21:44 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 19:30:52 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 19:42:26 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 20:08:34 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 20:12:58 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 20:26:33 01/24/03 Fri ~Kamali'I~ -- Kei, 20:31:00 01/24/03 Fri )(. Poetic Tragedy .)( -- Vance, 20:44:23 01/24/03 Fri ± Let | It | Go ± -- Armand, 20:45:31 01/23/03 Thu