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Date Posted: 03:19:51 03/24/05 Thu
Author: Wide Shut
Subject: Re: Erie Presence
In reply to: Jessica 's message, "Erie Presence" on 01:01:45 03/24/05 Thu

>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Sure I'm fine, I'm just sobbing like a
>>>little
>>>>>>>>girl
>>>>>>>>>>>>>because i feel like it," he said
>>>>sarcastically,
>>>>>>>>"of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>course something is bloody wrong, what's it
>>>>>look
>>>>>>>>>>>>>like?" he snapped suddenly filled with
>rage.
>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark backed down, looking at
>>Dancing
>>>>>>Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>with fear shown clearly in her eyes "Sorry?"
>>>>She
>>>>>>>>>said
>>>>>>>>>>>"Sorry?" he questioned, "you don't even know
>>>>what
>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>>did!" he cried with exasperation. "You don't
>>>>even
>>>>>>>>>love
>>>>>>>>>>>me and your sister."
>>>>>>>>>>"What the hell are you talking about?"
>>Lightning
>>>>>>>Dark
>>>>>>>>>>said, her anger rising "Of course I love you!
>>>And
>>>>>>>>>>Juveile Bliss! I don't know where you heard
>>>>>that...
>>>>>>>>>>that... that stuff from but you should know
>>that
>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>love you and Juvenile Bliss!" She screamed
>then
>>>>>>>>>>galloped off at lightning speed into the
>forest
>>>>>>>>>"Then how come you couldn't remember us?" he
>>>>>>>scrreamed
>>>>>>>>>back at her, hoping that he'd never see her
>>>again.
>>>>>>>>"Then how come you couldn't remember us?"
>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>Dark heard Dancing Sun scream. She stopped and
>>>>>turned
>>>>>>>>around.
>>>>>>>>"I don't know what the hell you're talking about
>>>>but
>>>>>>>>for your information, this horse called Wide
>Shut
>>>>>>>>attacked us. He's on the darq side so I expect
>>you
>>>>>>>>might know him" She screamed back and then
>>>>>>dissapeared
>>>>>>>>into the forest.
>>>>>>>>~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~Meanwhile~!~!~!~!~!~!~
>>>>>>>>Wide Shut walked through the forest looking for
>>>>>>>>berries or something to eat. He stopped when he
>>>>>heard
>>>>>>>>the sound of galloping hooves. He stood still in
>>>>the
>>>>>>>>shadows and saw a flash of red go past.
>>>>>>>>He smirked and slowly followed it bearly making
>a
>>>>>>>>sound.
>>>>>>>Deeply offended by this last remark, all his
>>>>>remaining
>>>>>>>love for Lightning Dark dissappeared, he turned
>>him
>>>>>>>head and walked off towards Juvenile Bliss,
>>>>>>>By this time Juvenile Bliss was up and standing
>>>>>again,
>>>>>>>she looked with concern at Dancing Sun, then left
>>>>him
>>>>>>>after whispering, "you're still my friend, but I
>>>>>>>should go check on Lightning Dark now." She
>>trotted
>>>>>>>off in the direction her sister had gone.
>>>>>>Lightning Dark was still running at full speed but
>>>>>>stopped as she was quite out of breath. She
>>>collapsed
>>>>>>tot he ground crying.
>>>>>>"Hello again, my dear" Wide Shut said. Lightning
>>>>>>Dark's head shot up.
>>>>>>"you again!" she exclaimed
>>>>>>"yes me. I sense you are in distress, my child"
>>Wide
>>>>>>shut said trtting up to Lightning Dark and lying
>>>down
>>>>>>"Tell me. What's the matter?"
>>>>>>"Why should you care?" Lightning Dark said turning
>>>>her
>>>>>>head away
>>>>>>"Because I do" Wide Shut said "OK. Why not you
>come
>>>>to
>>>>>>my cave and I'll help you get all refreshed? How
>>>>about
>>>>>>that?"
>>>>>>Lightning Dark suddenly stood up and yelled
>>>>>>"WHY ARE YOU BEING SO NICE ALL OF A SUDDEN? WHY?
>>YOU
>>>>>>TRIED TO KILL ME BACK THERE? WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR
>>>>>>PROBLEM?"
>>>>>>"My dear! I was under a trance. It every time at
>>>>noon.
>>>>>>So when it's noon advise you get out of my sight
>>for
>>>>>>an hour. It's a curse"
>>>>>>Oh. I'm sorry. Is there any way to get rid of this
>>>>>>curse?"
>>>>>>"I'm not sure but I am searching for an answer.
>>It's
>>>>a
>>>>>>curse in my family. Everyone had died from this
>>>>curse.
>>>>>>I'm the only one left. Now come my child. Let me
>>>feed
>>>>>>you something" Wide Shut said standing up and
>>>>trotting
>>>>>>towards his cave. Lightning Dark followed happily.
>>>>>>Boy, was she hungry!
>>>>>Seeing this happen but not hearing any of the
>>>>>conversation, JB was shocked, it broke her heart
>her
>>>>>sister had fallen for someone that was a murderous
>>>>>monster, so she slowly trooted away into the
>>distance
>>>>>hoping her sister would learn her lesson.
>>>>Wide Shut fed Lightning Dark some juicy berries and
>>>>some green grass. And now she was sleeping
>>>>'I don't know why she trust me. I nearly killed her
>>>>friend.' Wide Shut thought as he watched Lightning
>>>>Dark sleep. Wide Shut kept seeing images of what
>>>>happened before.
>>>>Their talk. The fight. Lightning Dark's friend
>flying
>>>>through the air.
>>>>'Oh god. I hope i didn't hurt her.' He saw an image
>>of
>>>>Juvenile Bliss looking at him while she was in a
>>>trance
>>>>'Wow. She looks really pretty... Oh gods. I think
>I'm
>>>>falling for her.'
>>>>He shook his head, took one last look at Lightning
>>>>Dark, stood up, whispered to no one in perticular
>>>>"I'll be back in the morning", and trotted outside
>>for
>>>>some fresh night air
>>>
>>>Juvenile Bliss had been waiting close by, her guilty
>>>conciousness getting the best of her. She had been
>>>waiting in the shadows hoping to find a chance to
>save
>>>her gorgeous sister from doom that was sure to be
>>>waiting for her. As Wide Shut left Juvenile Bliss
>>>crept forward. CRACk!! 'oh, no,' she thought as she
>>>lifted her foot off of the now broaken twig.
>>Wide Shut's head whipped around as he heard the crack
>>of a twig.
>>'Better go and investigate this' He thought as he
>>crept slowly towards where he heard the sound. He used
>>his magic to make him invisible and as quiet as a
>>mouse he saw who made the sound.
>>'It's her...' He thought
>
>Sencing an erie presence Juvenile Bliss slowed, and
>drew back into the shadows. As her eyes grew
>accustomed to the dark she searched for what she felt
>was sure to out there, but alas, she did not find
>anything.
Wide Shut kept his eyes on Juvenile Bliss as she stopped, stepped back and looked around. But thanks to his magic he was safe.
He trotted up to her and nudged her while turning visible again.
"Why are you here?" He said

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