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Date Posted: 23:11:38 03/08/05 Tue
Author: Lightning Dark & Wide Shut
Subject: Re: Life or Death?
In reply to: Juvenile Bliss 's message, "Re: Life or Death?" on 23:15:29 03/07/05 Mon

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Light Darkness (DUH!)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: 2 and a half yrs
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: Reddish-Brown
>with
>>>>>>>black
>>>>>>>>>>>>mane
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>yellow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>stripes
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Breed: I dunno
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>A milky white, young mare
>>>>>cantered
>>>>>>>>up
>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Dark she tossed her head
>>trying
>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>get
>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>mane
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>out
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her eyes, "hello dear friend,
>>>>I'm
>>>>>>>>>glad
>>>>>>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>could
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>join
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>us." Her voice sounded like
>>>soft
>>>>>>>>rain
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>pattering
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ground, she nipped Lightning
>>>>Dark
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>playfully.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark looked to see
>>her
>>>>>>>>>sister
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and nipped her back "Nice to
>>>know
>>>>>>>>>>>someone
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>here
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>isn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>complete stranger" she said
>>>>>nipping
>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>back
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Come
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>let's play!" and she ran off
>>>with
>>>>>>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>galloping after her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB stretched her neck forward
>>>>>erging
>>>>>>>>>>>>>herself
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>go
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>faster, racing her sister was
>>>>>>>>something
>>>>>>>>>>>>she
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>hadnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>done
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>in a long time and she enjoyed
>>>the
>>>>>>>>rush
>>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>adrenalin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>again.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>LD looked behind her and saw her
>>>>>>>sister
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>gaining
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her. She didn't dee where she
>was
>>>>>>>going
>>>>>>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ran
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>head
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>first into a bigger, taller,
>>>>>stronger
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>stallion.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh o..." she said as the
>>stallion
>>>>>>>>>>towered
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>over
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB came up to see if she was
>>>>alright
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh, my god! Lighning Dark! Are
>>>you
>>>>>>>>ok?"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Concern showed on every feature
>of
>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>face
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sister, as she stared up at the
>>>>>>>stallion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>defiantly,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>then suddenly she realised it was
>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>long
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>lost
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>twin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>brother.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Dancing Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: three
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Gender: stallion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: white with red patches
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Statis : darq
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Dancing Sun?! oh how I'm glad
>too
>>>>>see
>>>>>>>>>>you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>this
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>is
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>like a family reunion!"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"as I am glad to see you both, my
>>>>>>>little
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sisters,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>am
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>right in presuming you still are
>>>>both
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>neautral?'
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>bowed gladly.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Well yes I am but I'm not too
>sure
>>>>>>bout
>>>>>>>>>>JB"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>DS and JB were twins, yes, but
>what
>>>>>>they
>>>>>>>>>>>>>didn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>was that LD had the hots for DS
>>>since
>>>>>>>she
>>>>>>>>>>>>>first
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>saw
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>him.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>'Sigh' LD thought 'If only he
>>wasn't
>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>>brother
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>would ask him out in a second' she
>>>>>>>>thought
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sadly
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"So! What brings you here Dancing
>>>>>Sun?"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Well... I just found out a bit of
>>>>>>>>>>disturbing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>news
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>about our family, it looks like
>this
>>>>>>isnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>actually
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>much of a family reunion, Mother
>>told
>>>>>me
>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>month
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ago
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>that I'm adopted, I was taken in
>>when
>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>mother
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>was
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>killed by wolves, I'm not your
>>>>>brother!"
>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sighed
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>depressed and rested his head
>across
>>>>>>LD's
>>>>>>>>>>>>>back.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh," gasped Juvenile Bliss shocked
>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>stunned.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"No way Jose!!" Lightning Dark
>>>>exclaimed
>>>>>>>>>>>loving
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>touch of Dancing Sun's head on her
>>>back
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>'This can't be real' she thought
>>>>>>excitedly
>>>>>>>>>>>>>'Now's
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>chance'
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun? May I talk to
>you
>>>>in
>>>>>>>>>>>>private
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>minute?" Lightning Dark asked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Already having an idea what this
>might
>>>>be
>>>>>>>>>>>about,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Juvenile Bliss stepped awy with a
>>>cheeky
>>>>>>>>grin
>>>>>>>>>>>on
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>face, "go get him LD."
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Yes? What is it LD? Is something
>>>>wrong?"
>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>asked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>concerned. Ever since he had been
>told
>>>>>>that
>>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>wasnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>really one of the family he had
>>>>>fantasised
>>>>>>>>>>>about
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>him
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and LD being together, maybe this was
>>>>his
>>>>>>>>>>>>chance.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark trotted over to an
>>>>>>>overhanging
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>willow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>for a bit of privacy and waited for
>>>>>Dancing
>>>>>>>>>Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>follow, which he did.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun! Um... ever since I
>>>>saw
>>>>>>>>>>>you...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>um... Well, I dunno... Well I've kinda
>>>>>>>>>>>>>developed...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>O
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>jeez, how can i say this! It's just
>>>>that-"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Dark was cut off but the sound of a
>>>crash
>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>thunder
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"How can this be possible? Today was
>>>>>>>supposed
>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>be
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sunny day! It can't've change unless a
>>>>>dark
>>>>>>>>>>>force
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>energy is being used!" Lightning Dark
>>>>said
>>>>>>>in
>>>>>>>>>>>>fear
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>all the other horses in the field
>>>>panicked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"it's alight Lightning Dark, I'm here,
>>>>>>>nothing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>could
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>beat me, I'm darq, and if this froce is
>>>>>too,
>>>>>>>>>>then
>>>>>>>>>>>>>it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>will be alright," he cooed trying to
>>>>>comfort
>>>>>>>>>>her,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>distressed him that she was worried.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Yes I suppose you're right." Lightning
>>>>Dark
>>>>>>>>>said
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>looking out to the field of panicking
>>>>horses
>>>>>>>>>"But
>>>>>>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>know me. I simply hate thunder storms!
>>>>>And...
>>>>>>>>Oh
>>>>>>>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>god! Where's Juvenile Bliss? I can't see
>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>anywhere!!!" Lightning Dark panicked and
>>>>ran
>>>>>>>>out
>>>>>>>>>>>>>into
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>the field of all the other horses who,
>>>>>unlike
>>>>>>>>>>her,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>were much, much bigger, stronger and
>>>>>>taller...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Stricken with panick for her safety both
>>>>>>>Dancing
>>>>>>>>>>>Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and Juvenile Bliss galloped out to her,
>>>>>>pushing
>>>>>>>>>>>past
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>other horses not caring if they were hurt
>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>fear
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>that there little Lightning Dark would be
>>>>>>>>killed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>"My
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>dear, are you hurt?" they cried in
>unison.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark heard them both but they
>>were
>>>>>>>from
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>opposite sides of her. She looked left,
>>>>that's
>>>>>>>>>>where
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>she heard Dancing Sun's voice. She looked
>>>>>>right,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>that's where she heard Juvenile Bliss'
>>>voice.
>>>>>>>She
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>reared up on her hind legs hoping they
>>would
>>>>>>see
>>>>>>>>>>>her.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>They did and they both ran faster to get
>to
>>>>>>her.
>>>>>>>>>>But
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>before anyone of them did, a giganormos
>>>horse
>>>>>>>>>>bumped
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>into her and she was knocked to the
>ground,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>unconscious, while most horses missed her
>>>>some
>>>>>>>>>>>>stepped
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on her without giving her second thought
>>>>>>>>>>>>>Fired with anger at the other horses
>>>disregard
>>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>life, especially a life he loved, he bolted
>>>>>>>>forward
>>>>>>>>>>>>>splitting the crowds in half, giving him a
>>>>>clear
>>>>>>>>>>path
>>>>>>>>>>>>>to Lightning Dark, "please, please dont be
>>>>>>dead,"
>>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>whispered tears running down his face, "I
>>>>>>>couldn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>bere anyone else dying!"
>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark stiired a bit when Dancing
>Sun
>>>>>>said
>>>>>>>>>>>>this opened one eye to look at him. "Dancin
>>>>Sun"
>>>>>>>>she
>>>>>>>>>>>>said just as Juvenile Bliss walked through
>>>>>>towards
>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun "I'm sorry.
>>I'm
>>>>>so
>>>>>>>>>>>>sorry I didn't say this before but... I love
>>>>>>>>you..."
>>>>>>>>>>>>Then she fell unconscious again her
>breathing
>>>>>>>>>>>>extremely shallow. Rain falling down on her
>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>Dancing Sun as well as the other horses who
>>>had
>>>>>>>>>>>>stopped panicking as the thunder had stopped
>>>>>>>>>>>With a rush of passion he dragged to shelter
>>in
>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>dark, warm cave, "I love you too, Lightning
>>>>>Dark,"
>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>whispered as the night swooped around them.
>>>>>>>>>>:::::Lightning's Dream:::::
>>>>>>>>>>Lightning wandered through a dark, damp and
>>cold
>>>>>>>>>>forest. She was searching for something but
>she
>>>>>>>>didn't
>>>>>>>>>>know what.
>>>>>>>>>>'Where's Dancing Sun and Juvenile Bliss?' She
>>>>>>>>thought.
>>>>>>>>>>'What am I doing here?'
>>>>>>>>>>"Hello? Anyone? Someone help me!" She called.
>>>She
>>>>>>>>>>comtinued to trot her way through the forest.
>>>>>>>>>>"Hello?" she called as she saw something move
>>>>>>>>>>"Hello my dear child" said a voice
>>>>>>>>>>"Wh-who are you?" Lightning asked
>>>>>>>>>>"My dear child, it is against my wishes to do
>>>>this
>>>>>>>>but
>>>>>>>>>>I'm Death. I've come to take you away to the
>>>>>>>>>>afterlife" 'Death' said
>>>>>>>>>>"No! I don't want to go! I want to stay with
>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>Bliss and Dancing Sun!" Lightning Dark said
>>>>moving
>>>>>>>>>>backwards
>>>>>>>>>>"I'm sorry my dear child but you can't!
>There's
>>>>>>>>>>nothing I can do!" Death said
>>>>>>>>>>"Please!" Lightning begged as she started to
>>cry
>>>>>>>(can
>>>>>>>>>>horses cry?) "I don't want to die! I want to
>>>>stay!
>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>love Dancing Sun! And Juvenile Bliss! I don't
>>>>want
>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>leave them"
>>>>>>>>>>Death sighed "My dear child, you have
>something
>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>live for. In my book of rules, rule #104 says,
>>>>'if
>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>have something to live for you may live'. So
>>>I'll
>>>>>>>let
>>>>>>>>>>you live. Good luck, my child"
>>>>>>>>>>And with that Death dissapeared in a flash of
>>>>>>light.
>>>>>>>>>>In the cave Lightning stirred and opened her
>>>eyes
>>>>>>>>>>"Dancing Sun" she whispered as she was still
>>>weak
>>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>tired
>>>>>>>>>"Stay still my love, you are weak," he said,"
>if
>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>need something just say the word and i'll get
>>>it."
>>>>>>>>'Love' Lightning Dark thought 'He called me
>>>"Love"'
>>>>>>>>"Dancing Sun, why did you call me 'Love'? How do
>>>>you
>>>>>>>>know? And where is Juvenile Bliss?" Lightning
>>Dark
>>>>>>>>said straining to lift her head to look for her
>>>>>>>"I called you love, because.... because I love
>>you,
>>>>I
>>>>>>>have for a long while now,"he paused wondering
>>what
>>>>>>>type of reaction he would get, "don't worry about
>>>>>>>Juvenile Bliss, she is a smart giral, she will be
>>>>>>>safe."
>>>>>>Hearing that Juvenile will be safe Lightning Dark
>>>>>>dropped her head and closed her eyes.
>>>>>>"I love you too, Dancing Sun. I also have for a
>>long
>>>>>>time"
>>>>>He smiled bewildered by this peice of news, "I'm
>>glad
>>>>>you do, I don't know I would have done if you had
>>>>>rejected me." He smiled then rested his head on her
>>>>>back to keep her warm from the freezing night air.
>>>>~~~~~~ New Character~~~~~~
>>>>Name - Wide Shut (sounds weird, right?)
>>>>Age - 7yrs
>>>>Gender - Male
>>>>Breed - i dunno... But he's evil... on the darq side
>>>>Colour - Electric Black body, mane and hooves plus
>>his
>>>>eyes
>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>>>>As Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun slept, Juvenile
>>came
>>>>in and saw them. She also decided to sleep.
>>>>Unaware to all of them there was also someone there,
>>>>someone who wanted to ruin Lightning Dark and
>Dancing
>>>>Sun's relationship... Wide Shut
>>>>"Make the most of it now, Dancing Sun. I'll make
>sure
>>>>to ruin your life by taking away your girl and your
>>>>special friend" A cold and mysterious voice
>whispered
>>>>into the night before you could hear the galloping
>of
>>>>hooves taking off into the night
>>>Juvenile Bliss startled at the sound of hooves and
>saw
>>>the mysterious, dark, handsom stallion dissapear into
>>>the night, she made nothing of it presuming it was
>>>just a dream of what she wished to have but couldn't
>>>and went back to sleep.
>>Lightning Dark woke up felling better then how she did
>>yesterday. She shifted out from under Dancing Sun and
>>went outside to get a drink.
>>While she was drinking she didn't notice the sound of
>>approaching hooves or the rush of black. But when she
>>finished drinking and turned around, to go back, she
>>came face to face with none other then: Wide Shut!!!
>>"Hello, my sweet..." he said approaching her
>Waking from her slumber once more, she again saw the
>handsome stallion, and as if in a trance she walked
>over dreamily and said, "are you and angel or a saint?"
Wide Shut whipped around and saw a mare looking at him through glazed over eyes.
"Who the hell are you?" he hissed "Ca't you see I'm doing something?"
Thanking Juvenile Bliss coming, Lightning tried to get away. Unfortunately Wide Shut was faster then she thought
"Where do you think you're going?" He said when she started to run to the cave where Dancing Sun was

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