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Subject: Re: Erato-- my poem, please comment!


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Olivia
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Date Posted: 16:24:44 08/17/05 Wed
In reply to: Georgia 's message, "Erato-- my poem, please comment!" on 08:56:20 06/19/05 Sun
 >She was so powerful in her delicate, harsh corset and
>soft feet. She trod Goddess-like on the beat-up
>blackened wood that should be lined with clouds.
>
>I watched her; but she didn't know. I was hidden,
>dirty. She was getting ready for another leech.
>Another parasite who wanted to suck her beauty away.
>
>Her hair was loose like silk, like the dust that
>flitted in the rays of drowsy sun collapsing through
>the window. Lips like a small delicate wound.
>
>Her skin was so pale and soft that air could hurt it.
>And her hair fell like sun onto her breasts, which
>were soft apple-blossom satin.
>
>I'm didn’t mean to hurt you, Erato. I’m sorry. I
>couldn't give back to you all that you gave to me. I
>just needed some of your beauty, like the leeches did.
>
>I’m sorry, Erato. I just wanted to give you the clouds.

I like it! Very visual. A sort of New Age-y thing. It's nice. Can you comment on my story, by the way? Thanks
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