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Date Posted: 16:08:51 05/03/08 Sat
Author: Mary
Author Host/IP: cpe-69-135-186-204.woh.res.rr.com / 69.135.186.204
Subject: Mani, this is nicely done...(r)
In reply to: ManiRani 's message, "After" on 07:24:52 05/03/08 Sat

Thank you so much for coming here and for posting your work. It takes alot of nerve to post one's work that first time - congratulations. This is very well done. I especially thought that this line was good:

<i>But for this moment, she drinks steadily, holds on to the last piece of herself that was undeniably his...<i>

It conveys her pain and the way she holds onto it, onto him, for completely letting him go is unthinkable. Please continue to share your work with us.

Thank you,

Mary

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  • Wonderful writing! Hope there will be more. Thanks, Mani! (NT) -- Sheila, 02:32:16 05/04/08 Sun
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