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Subject: Re: A glass of lemon tea in the hottie-day ! (Short Story)


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Date Posted: 00:56:20 04/15/04 Thu
In reply to: Ree 's message, "Re: A glass of lemon tea in the hottie-day ! (Short Story)" on 03:35:00 04/13/04 Tue

Eh, mending elu kali masi bisa bilang salah kaprah. Mungkin ape sangking bolotnya gw jd kagak mudeng ama apa yg ditulis.
Yang ditulis banyak banget tapi intinya cuma satu, kayaknya sih penulisnya berkoar2 tentang cintanya yg gede bang2 gitu. Nah gara2 kebanyakan kata2 itu jadi bikin mabok & ngantuk bacanya. Heran. Bukannya cinta itu sesuatu yg tak terwakilkan oleh kata2 yg macem manapun? Sesuatu yg alami & mengalir. Malahan klu uda maksain kayak model tulisan itu, kayaknya mungkin ada a big problem sebenernya dengan cinta mrk itu. Ah auk ah, gelep :)

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