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Subject: Hey hey hey my pretty peoples. If you like poetry, please read inside.

Author:
Jazzers *hmmm...*

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Date Posted: 21:08:11 04/16/01 Mon
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Hey everyone who decided to look. I dont have much to do so I decided to post here with a couple poems and see what y'all thought. if you dont like em, lie! ((nah, tell me the truth ;))

Pearls, Roses, Moons

Pearls
Of silver
And black
Twirl within your eyes.
Roses
Soft and sweet
Lay their pettles
On your lips.
Moons as pale
As sunrise
Dances upon
Your cheeks
Only torn
By gentle
Blush
Carried by the breeze.

Forbidden

Its so easy
To fool
Lips of crimson passion
Into thinking
Truth of
Lies.
Young hearts
Know no
Age
Untill they fall
In love
With the
Younger passion.
Eyes of crystle
Gaze into one another
One wise with age
One wise by nature.
Satin lips
Touch briefly
Fighting the pain
Of what is wrong.
He is an older man.
She is but a child,
An old soul trapped
Inside the body
Of a young girl
Tourtured by
The truth,
That she will never
Have him
Despite
Her endless longing.

Closed Eyes

I was
Once asked
What I see
When I close my eyes.
I simply answered
Dark.
But now
When I close
My eyes
All walls
Of anything
Anyone
Ever said
To be impossible
Fall
To the ground
In piles
Of shattered blood
Of pained lost
Cries
Of doves.
I stare
At a flood
Of torn roses
Spread
Across
The ocean
In shining
Red
Tears
Littering
The deep
Beauty
Of the crystle
Pool.
Wet
Pettles
Stick helplessly
To all
That near
Be boat
Or fish.
The skreetch
Of birds
Echo
Through the air
Ringing
In
My ears
When
I close
My eyes.

The Silence

The silence
It scares me
It lets me
Think.
Pointless thoughts
Of things
That will not
That can never
Come to be.
Line after line
Word after word
Sobbing silently
Because
Life is never fair.
I hear things
When I am alone
Voices
Whispers
Secrets unknown.
I see things
When I cannot think
And they haunt me
They haunt
My sleep.
My only comfort
My pen
And my paper
Silent peace
Of silent tears
Silent calming
Of deeper fears.
Tiny tears
In the edges of
My worn heart
Slowly meeting
In a large
Rip,
The bigger
Picture.
The silence
It scares me
It lets me
Think.

alrighty my pretty peoples... theres a few... if you're reading this before you read them, they really dont take that long to read.

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Those are good Jazz. I'm still very jealous, since I can't write poetry to save my life. sighs (NT)	Samantha	21:32:58 04/16/01 Mon

those r really good...I really like the one about silence! (but they're all good!) (NT)	member	23:02:35 04/16/01 Mon

Those are really good Jazz! I like them! I really liked Closed Eyes! if you want, read these ones i wrote @ a sleepover. please!	Di Di	15:19:39 04/17/01 Tue

I like those! Thery're cool! Want to hear one I wrote that everyone went nuts over when I wrote it?	Cheyenne	16:19:39 04/17/01 Tue
Thats neat Cheyenne! I like it! Your lucky to have had it published (kinda)! (NT) -- Di Di, 11:53:27 04/18/01 Wed Thanks! Ya. It is neat! I'm so excited. We were doing SS and that high school girl came in and picked up my poem. I'm so excited!!!!!!!! (NT) -- Cheyenne Crazy Cheyenne ~Just call me CC~, 16:59:18 04/18/01 Wed