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Date Posted: 06:11:55 11/30/03 Sun
Author: Vera
Subject: Re: Task 8 - Tito Matias homepage
In reply to: Tito Matias 's message, "Task 8 - Tito Matias homepage" on 16:43:11 11/29/03 Sat

Tito,

I liked your homepage and the idea of including the poem.
Please correct the following:

instead of (1)"a 23 year old write "a 23-year-old " because the expression is in the position of an adjective.
(2) instead of "and better relationship with others" write "and have better relationship with others"
(3)instead of "abrod" write "abroad"

Vera

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