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Date Posted: 07:13:28 11/09/03 Sun
Author: Renata Nascimento
Subject: Re: writing 5
In reply to: Vera 's message, "Re: writing 5" on 15:10:18 11/05/03 Wed

Vera,

Can you, please, take a look to see if my message is better now after following your correction and advice? Here it is:

Hi THERE,

First of all, I do not want to be found in this island. For this reason, I cannot tell you who I am and not even where I am due to two reasons. First, I have been through a big change inside me since I am rediscovering me and second, I am in the middle of nowhere. All I see is water and water… However, there is one single thing I do want you to do for me, which is to shout to the world that I am just fine and that I do not want to come back home. I mean, I can, at last, talk to me and do whatever I want to without following anyone’s rules or beliefs.

I’m sorry, but can I ask you one more thing? Do not try searching for me because I have already got the freedom I’ve wanted! Because of this, I do not want anybody taking that freedom away.

Thanks for your big help! Take care! In case you really wonder who and where I am, send this bottle back with your name and address because I have fish friends, which will certainly bring it to me.
Love,
Happy Woman.

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