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Subject: chapter 15

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Date Posted: Thursday, November 17, 12:51:42pm
In reply to: Nell 's message, "Honor on the Field, 15" on Thursday, November 17, 10:13:49am

I like many, many things about this chapter, but this

...Nikita, had caused to be set up in an open section of the lawn such sporting entertainments as were suitable for mixed company, and in the mid-afternoon the party ambled that way.

made me giggle. You've made them sound just like a herd of amiable sheep, overseen by a benevolent sheepdog.

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Thanks for another chapter. (NT)signme1Friday, November 18, 09:42:44am
    Thank you for your comments. *g* (NT)NellFriday, November 18, 06:12:41pm

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