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Subject: I liked the old version but you're right about this (r)

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Date Posted: Tuesday, September 13, 07:51:46pm
In reply to: Juli 's message, "Rewrite of Chapter 18 (1st half)" on Tuesday, September 13, 03:25:25pm

It works a lot better at explaining all of the tension and reluctance Michael had about returning to life in the big city. Either way, I love what you've done with this story and I'm so happy to see you back with more - Yea!! I only liked the old version because of seeing how well Michael and Elena got along, and of how seeing the two of them together was the catalyst of Nikita finally beginning to realize that she was in love with Michael. *happy sigh* :)

So glad to see you back with more of this story. No matter how busy my day I always stop by at least once a day to see if you've added more.


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