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Date Posted: 19:17:14 05/24/01 Thu
Author: sj
Subject: some great moments here - 'light ran patterns', 'lapped and licked' - but it's a draft version, it needs tightening up, which i know is often what i say about your work. it does, though. this has potential - you should write more poetry.
In reply to: james 's message, "perhaps the only poem youll see me do" on 19:21:49 05/08/01 Tue


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[> The first of many I hope. This confused me very much on the first couple of readings but now it sounds very nice and beautiful. It has a nice sound to it. I don't have any real idea of what the narrator's position is and that undermines it for me. If the -- luke, 20:27:33 05/24/01 Thu

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