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Date Posted: 14:42:17 05/27/01 Sun
Author: meg
Subject: Dusk pt 2: yep i liked this too. You seem to have got everything into those few lines. What was the pt 2 for out of cuirosity? (please excuse the spelling). Nothing else to say, perfect!
In reply to: tim 's message, "more rhymey poems (forgive all these poems, nut I have a backlog of about a years writing no one has ever seen)" on 14:16:05 05/25/01 Fri


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[> Hum, It seems as if you have tried to squish too much into it and it appears a little jumbled up (before si says it, probably more like the confusion my stuff ends up in. I don't like the purple and the electric blue together but then that could just be me thinking there is a colour clash. My favourtie lines are the third and fourth and the last two. These seem to come together and compliment each other although then i'm not sure they go with the title. -- mags, 14:48:49 05/27/01 Sun

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[> [> i am rarely rude to you, miss g! -- si, 20:36:49 06/05/01 Tue

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