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Subject: My new poem "Lonely"


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Darkfire75
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Date Posted: 10:46:51 05/25/02 Sat
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I wrote this poem on a request from my friend KewlGurl. I hope the words mean something because they sure do to me. Anyway, here it is:

"Lonely"

My life is one twisted game,
everything I do is put to shame.
No matter how hard I try,
I cannot fight the urge to cry.

I look into the mirror and what do I see?
I see a lonely and depressed person staring back at me.

Words cannot describe the way I feel,
I feel the earth crumble on its spinning wheel.
Love is a luxury I cannot afford,
but I almost wish I could love when I am bored.

I look into the mirror and what do I see?
I see a lonely and depressed person staring back at me...

***
Words to the lonely and depressed:

Life can seem so worthless, but then I realize that throwing it away would only deepen my guilt. A life without love and guidance isn't much of a life. If you look inside a mirror, you will see the person you have made yourself to be.

Darkfire75

Were the words good? Do i sound depressed? I hope not. I just hope it touches someone's heart.

P.S.-This one was for you, Kewl! *_~

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Re: My new poem "Lonely"Blackwidina14:06:54 05/26/02 Sun


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