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Subject: SERIES PREMIERE : Our Own Voice


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written by VKMax
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Date Posted: 18:31:39 07/01/04 Thu
In reply to: written by VKMax 's message, "SERIES PREMIERE : Our Own Voice" on 18:30:37 07/01/04 Thu

INT. TUNNELS – DAY

Angel stalks forward with Athena close behind him. She is holding a cross bow as he remains weaponless. Almost as casually as she is walking, he spins on his feet to face her

ANGEL
Who are you?

ATHENA
Expand

ANGEL
Who are you? Where are you from? What are you about?

ATHENA
I’m Athena Dimuzio, I’m was born in Brooklyn twenty seven years and fifteen days ago, I have two sisters, one brother and a mother. My father was killed by a vampire at some point and I’m about living.

ANGEL
You don’t look twenty seven

ATHENA
I…meant to say twenty four, I’m twenty four

ANGEL
You said twenty seven

ATHENA
I meant twenty four

ANGEL
But you siad…

ATHENA
You once said you’d never work with Wolfram & Hart but things change champ.

ANGEL
When Wesley hired you did he tell you about my last assistant?

ATHENA
Eve? What a waste of space

ANGEL
She was a sheep. Worse than Harmony. She followed where she was lead and as far as I know was crushed by a building four months ago

ATHENA
Wow. Crappy ending to a crappy story. Why does this concern me?

ANGEL
Because in the end, if someone does me wrong, they’ll end badly

ATHENA
Way for the vote of confidence grandpa
(pause)
Now weren’t we here for a reason?

CUT TO.

INT. WESLEYS OFFICE – DAY.

HARMONY approaches WESLEY holding a large mug of tea

HARMONY
Hey second in command, I bought you some tea. English people drink it apparently

WESLEY
Put it down there

HARMONY
Are you okay?

WESLEY
I’m fine

WESLEY is buried among books, Harmony picks one up

HARMONY
Life through dimensions? Oh is this about Fred?

WESLEY
Yes

HARMONY
I don’t get it, if you’re so concerned about her body why not examine it?

WESLEY
(through teeth)
Because I can’t find it

HARMONY
Hello! It’s out there now in a deeper shade of blue

WESLEY
That’s not Fred

HARMONY
Right, but it is her body

WESLEY
Do you have anything worth while to say?

HARMONY
(hurt)
No

WESLEY
Then leave before I remove you

CUT TO.

INT. SHELTER – NIGHT

Spike graps the demon by the throat and slams him towards Gunn who spins him and pins him to the wall

GUNN
Where is she?

DEMON
I don’t know what you’re talking about

GUNN
Like hell is you don’t!

DEMON
Let me go

SPIKE
Kill ‘im

ANNE
No, no killing him until we know where she is

DEMON
Him?

GUNN
It!

DEMON
She!

GUNN
Whatever! YOU KNOW where she is and you’re going to tell me before I rip your mouth of and show it to you

DEMON
No please! I’ll talk

ANNE
He doesn’t seem so scary

SPIKE
Let him talk

DEMON
I know the girl – they took her in! She ran away because she was having these implanted dreams and…

GUNN
And what?

Gunn pushes the blunt side of a knife into the demons windepipe

DEMON
They’re going to mate with her tonight

GUNN
Is that everything I need?

DEMON
That’s everything, I swear! Let me go

GUNN
I’ll let you go

Gunn slits the demons throat

GUNN
Back to hell

CUT TO.

INT. CAFÉ – DAY

FRILLYA is sat with the woman, as their coffees arrive.

WOMAN
I’m sorry, it’s just… It’s uncanny how much you look like her

FRILLYIA
Fred?

WOMAN
Yes. I mean, I thought it couldn’t be, obviously it’s not but…everything
(pause)
the way you walk, your hair, your smell – except the way you speak it’s all her

FRILLYIA
You. You have deep feeling for Winifred. Feelings of love but from a long time passed

WOMAN
(uncomfortable)
Yes. We were friends in High School I couldn’t believe when her parents told me

FRILLYIA
Told you?

WOMAN
Sorry it’s just… Fred, my friend
(emotional)
She died seven months ago in L.A. That’s why it was so strange to see y’all

FRILLYIA
Fred. She was stored?

WOMAN
I wouldn’t put it like that but…

FRILLYRIA
Show me her resting place

WOMAN
I can’t…it’s back home, in texas

FRILLYRIA glares at the woman before waving her hand. Time changes and the woman slows down as a portal opens for Illyria.

She climbs through as the woman catches to speed, looking lost at her sudden loneliness

CUT TO.

INT. SEWERS DAY –

ANGEL and ATHENA glare through a hole at a group of vampires

ANGEL
I want you to stay back

ATHENA
I want to win the lottery but it aint happening in the next five years

ANGEL
What?

ATHENA
I’m a fighter

ANGEL
I’m not letting you get yourself killed

ATHENA
You don’t let me do anything. I’m my own woman mister.

ANGEL
Sure

ATHENA
Sure yourself

Angel steps forward as Athena reaches out her foot and trips him. He lands pressed against her, lips just apart

ANGEL
I’m seeing someone

ATHENA
And I’m not interested. I’m just preventing you from getting yourself killed

She pushes him away

ATHENA
You’re the second to last person I’d sleep with on this planet

ANGEL
Who’s the last?

ATHENA
You wouldn’t want to know

Angel goes to move forward again, she grabs him by the arm

ATHENA
Are you completely stupid or did it develop gradually? If you jump in like that you’re dead

ANGEL
I can’t take six vamps

ATHENA
But not the inevitable twelve hidden in the upper tunnels that lead into there

ANGEL
What?

ATHENA
Please. You’ve spend five years down here and you’re still that soft?

ANGEL
You know, I’m starting to really not like you

ATHENA
Let’s me watch me lose sleep over that one shall we?

ANGEL
Bug off

ATHENA
Bite me

ANGEL
Don’t temp me

VAMPIRE (O.S)
Excuse me

They spin towards him

VAMPIRE
Can I help you?

CUT TO.

INT. WAREHOUSE – NIGHT

GUNN and SPIKE burst through a door expecting a monster fight ahead of them

GUNN
Where is…

SPIKE
There’s nobody here

GUNN and SPIKE stare around them before thinning out

SPIKE
I’ll go upstairs

GUNN wonders off to the next room as Spike plods up the stairs

SPIKE
Here victim, victim, victim

Gunn continues through, jumping back as he comes to see the girl, strung up between two posts – her ribcage removed

GUNN
Spike!

Spike comes running down

SPIKE
What’s up Charlie B…
(beat)
Oh god

DEMON (O.S)
He’s the last person you need to worry about

They spin to see at least a half dozen demons facing them, all armed

CUT TO.

EXT. GRAVEYARD – DAY

FRYLLIRIA bends to her knees as she runs her fingers along the words “WINIFRED BURKLE – DAUGHTER AND HERO, 1975 – 2004”

Her eyes water as she stares at Fred’s image in a small opal shape in the corner of the stone.

CUT TO.

INT. WAREHOUSE – DAY

Spike sits in the corner exhausted. Blood down his face, tears in his jacket as Gunn flips to his feet with a sword in his hand.

GUNN
Anyone else want a go?

CUT TO.

INT. SEWERS – DAY.

ANGEL spins over the top of a vampire, kicking him in the face as he lands. He spin kicks to remove another.

ATHENA grabs a sword and swings it immediately through another vampire’s centre, cutting him in half. She holds a pole for support and boots a vamp in the chest.

ANGEL
Wow

Distracted, Angel fails to notice as a vampire approaches him

ATHENA
Angel!

He turns just in time for a stake to ram through the centre of his chest

END OF PART FOUR

INT. HYPERION – DAY

Flashes of blue waves through the hotel, Wesley looks up unsurprised. Evidently tired.

CUT TO.

INT. SEWERS – DAY

BLUE FLASH

ANGEL
Wow…

ANGEL spins just in time to prevent a stake coming through his chest – time has changed once again.

CUT TO.


INT. HYPERION HOTEL – DAY

ILLYRIA wonders in to Wesley, she’s in Freds form

WESLEY
(delighted)
Fred!
(off look)
Illyria. Stay away from that guise

ILLYRIA
You wish me to function among other shells. My form can not fit in to this society

WESLEY
True. Good thinking

ILLYRIA
Fred. I found her.

WESLEY
Found her where?

ILLYRIA
With her parents at the farm

WESLEYS eye sparkle with joy

ILLYRIA
She was covered in soil. A stone placed at her end.

WESLEY
A Grave?

ILLYRIA
Fred is dead, Wesley

WESLEY
No.

ILLYRIA
You have to discontinue this grief. She will not return to you.

WESLEY
You can leave now

ILLYRIA
I speak only what I see

WESLEY
You speak lies! Now get out of this office!

Illyria’s eyes widen as she stares at Wesley. She turns on her heels, morphing to blue as she leaves.

CUT TO.

INT. SEWERS – DAY

ATHENA stands on an upper level tunnel as she reaches her hand out to Angel

ATHENA
Nice job boss

ANGEL
You too

ATHENA
You know I think this could work out

ANGEL
I have my doubts, but I don’t disagree

ATHENA
I think you love me

ANGEL
What?

ATHENA
As a co-worker, you’ll have more time to be “not perfectly happy” with Nina while I kick ass

CUT TO.

INT. SHELTER – NIGHT

GUNN is holding ANNE

GUNN
We stopped them, they won’t be coming back.

SPIKE
Sorry about the girl

ANNE
You tried your best

GUNN
Best wasn’t good enough. This kinda thing shouldn’t happen. I spoke to some people and they’ll be over to do a sanctuary spell later

ANNE
What’s that?

GUNN
Something I learnt from an old friend. Don’t worry aint not demon’s gonna be fightin’ nobody up in here

SPIKE
Cept me

CUT TO.

INT. HYPERION – NIGHT

ANGEL comes down the stairs as ILLYRIA stares through WESLEYS office window

ANGEL
What’s the problem?

ILLYRIA
Wesleys head is broken

ANGEL
It is?

ILLYRIA
He thinks unthinkable things

ANGEL
You mean he lost it?

ILLYRIA
Lost what?

ANGEL
Never mind

ILLYRIA
I have seen the grave in this world. Fred Burkles family created a stone for her memory

ANGEL
You’ve seen that?

ILLYRIA
I have concern for Wesley. He will not hear of her demise

ANGEL
Give him time

ILLYRIA
Time has been given.

ANGEL
Give him more

Angel taps her as he moves over to Harmony and Athena who are both on their way out of the door

ANGEL
Athena…

ATHENA
Yes?

ANGEL
Thanks

ATHENA
Don’t mention it

ANGEL
So… you never answered who or what you are…names sure but…

ATHENA
I’ll see you on Monday Angel.

She looks back as he watches her walk off into the night

END

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Date Posted: 19:42:23 05/03/05 Tue

Funny name: Frillyia. Seriously, good intro!

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