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Date Posted: Sun, Jan 09 2005, 19:01:
Author: 丘老師
Subject: ＜和李詠琪詩－－砂糖怨＞
In reply to: 4D李詠琪(18)－－丘老師代貼 's message, "文學隨筆--新詩＜我是甚麼＞" on Sun, Jan 09 2005, 18:55:

＜和李詠琪詩－－砂糖怨＞

它是人造的
我卻是天造地設的
饞嘴的人總愛吃我
吃多了得了病卻怨我
於是發明它來代替我
我的命運如何
它的命運也將如何
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－

我想，李詠琪詩的「甚麼」應該不是砂糖吧，但因為她的詩，我卻想起砂糖和代糖。

這也許算是「誤讀」。

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