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Subject: Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS Author: SS [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 21:30:04 01/03/05 Mon In reply to: K 's message, "Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS" on 21:23:38 01/03/05 Mon INT. SUBURBAN TOWNHOUSE, LIVING ROOM SOFA - LATER THAT SAME NIGHT Donnie still has a quarter of the bottle of Scotch glued to his hand. He has moved over to the couch by now and is slouched over. Lights are off and the Heat soundtrack is blasting Moby on the stereo. The CD has been on repeat for 5 hours now. DONNIE (looking and pointing at the bottle in hand) I still hate you. There is a knock at the door. CUT TO [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS Author: B Otch [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 19:10:46 01/04/05 Tue INT. SUBURBAN TOWN HOME, SAME NIGHT Sara, a beautiful brunette, is laying on a couch in front of a TV. She is cozily tucked under a blanket, but you can see her legs slowly rubbing up and down against each other. A diminished buzzing sound fills the room. She tilts her head back slightly and lets out a short moan followed by a long, drawn out breath and a big smile. The door suddenly opens and Sara quickly turns her attention to the figure coming in. It's Leia. She looks edgy but is still as gorgeous as Sara, with short blonde hair that is flipped at the end and its tips dyed red. Loud music suddenly fills the room, then disappears again when Leia slams the door shut. LEIA Mother fucker! SARA Give it up, Lei. He's been playing that CD for like five hours. LEIA Insensitive, mother fucker! SARA Language. LEIA Wake up, Sara. The guy's an asshole. Everything he does is loud: the music, the video games, the porno! Come on! How many more weekends are we going to tolerate listening to him and his ONLY two friends talk about the same shit over and over again? They're so loud in that damn balcony you'd think they're putting on a play. SARA Oh. You're cranky. You can barely hear it in here. LEIA Well, unfortunately, my bedroom is over there and we share the same wall. I am not going to get any sleep tonight. SARA You wanna call the cops? LEIA No. I'm not a snitch. I mean, he's not a bad guy. Just an asshole. SARA I ran into him over the weekend, you know, while I was getting the mail. He looked like a decent guy. I mean, he didn't say a word to me; but I did feel like he kept staring at me when I wasn't looking. LEIA One of his friends did that to me, too. He was sitting in his truck waiting for the guy next door to come out. I had just gotten home from work. I swear he was staring at me from the time I left my car to the time I got into the house. SARA I heard him come home, but no one else showed up. LEIA He's by himself then? SARA He should be. You think he's okay? LEIA I don't know. SARA Huh. Maybe we should call the cops. LEIA I'm not a snitch. SARA Fine. I'll call 'em. LEIA Okay. SARA peels herself from the blanket and walks toward the kitchen to grab the phone. LEIA Hey, I'm going to un-pause the movie, okay? The TV is making a buzzing sound. That can't be good. CUT TO: [ Post a Reply to This Message ]