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Subject: Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS Author: K [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 17:19:10 01/14/05 Fri In reply to: K 's message, "Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS" on 16:43:05 01/14/05 Fri EXT. Suburban Townhouse Driveway - 3:17pm Donnie and Jake are pulling into Donnie's driveway in Jake's truck. At the next driveway over, two women are washing a nice sports car. They are scantily dressed, of course. JAKE Look at the asses on those girls Don! You have to be the luckiest sonuvabitch to have neighbors like that. DONNIE (staring) Yes ... they are. JAKE Huh? That doesn't even make sense. DONNIE What? Jake laughs at Donnie's distraction. JAKE Hey Don, it's too bad you're with Kate, otherwise I'd bet they'd totally party with you. DONNIE True dat, brudda ...(sighs)... Look Jake, I appreciate you bailing me out back there. JAKE Yeah, you owe me big time fool. You know we're already on Vicker's shit-list! DONNIE Fuck Vickers man, he's a novice. He's nothing. JAKE He's our boss. He writes our checks. DONNIE Fuck him Jake - there are bigger and better things on the horizon. Donnie gets out of the car. JAKE Whaddya mean? DONNIE Oh, I've got a little something up my sleeve. JAKE Da hell you talkin' about? Donnie looks over to his sexy neighbors and smiles. DONNIE Afternoon ladies. The ladies are Sara and Leia. That look at him with great disgust. Donnie is still a filthy mess from his portable bathroom incident. He smiles at them revealing his blue teeth. JAKE Dude, you are such a creep. DONNIE Thanks for the lift Jake! See ya at the office! Bye-bye now!!! Donnie slams the truck door and walks to his front door. Jake looks towards Sara and Leia and rolls down the passenger side window. JAKE Hey honey, would you mind hosing him off please? Sara smiles, but Leia looks annoyed. Donnie has already gone inside his house. Jake continues to stare at the women waiting for a reply. Leia grabs the hose out of Sara's hand and sprays water though the window into Jake's truck. JAKE Ahhh, bitch!!! CUT TO: [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]