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Subject: Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS Author: K [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 20:11:44 01/28/05 Fri In reply to: K 's message, "Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS" on 21:23:38 01/03/05 Mon INT. EMD Building elevator - after work. Donnie jumps into his office elevator and frantically presses the Lobby button. DONNIE C'mon, c'mon - need to get out of this hell-hole. The elevator stops on the 32nd floor. DONNIE Dammit! There's always one! The elevator door opens and an attractive woman enters. Donnie perks up and smiles at her. She looks at him closely, and Donnie nervously looks away. SARA Um ... don't you live on Chestnut? Donnie can't help but chuckle at his street name. DONNIE Uh, yeah - I do actually. SARA I thought so. DONNIE Why do you ask? SARA Oh, you don't recognize me, do you? Donnie looks the woman up and down. DONNIE ...You were washing a car the other day? SARA That's right. And you were covered in blue dye or something and have the pervert friend? DONNIE That's right! SARA You work in this building? DONNIE Yup? ...OMV. SARA Wow ...architect? DONNIE You got it. SARA Hmmm... I had you pegged for something much less. DONNIE Well thank you. SARA Oh, I'm sorry - did I hurt your feelings? DONNIE ..You're quite stuck-up aren't you? SARA You think so? DONNIE Little bit. SARA I didn't mean anything by it. The elevator opens to the lobby. Donnie gestures for Sara to exit first. SARA (Cont'd) Wow, a gentleman too. DONNIE The total package darlin'. The two are now walking through the lobby. SARA Wanna grab a drink with me? Donnie stops and smiles. He checks his watch as if he has somewhere to go. DONNIE Well neighbor, why the hell not? CUT TO: [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: Re: Alternate Screenplay: DIMINISHED SKILLS Author: K [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 20:31:45 01/28/05 Fri INT. Leia's bedroom - Night Leia is laying awake in the dark in her bed all alone. There is a loud thumping noise coming from the wall adjacent to her room. The faint sound of moaning and grunting can be heard. A muffled duet by Ice Cube and Lil Kim can be heard coming from a radio next door. SONG ...You can do it, put your ass into it / You can do it put your back into it... Leia reaches into her nightstand and grabs something that begins making a buzzing sound. CUT TO: [ Post a Reply to This Message ]