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Date Posted: 23:28:43 01/02/05 Sun
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Greg
's message, "Screenplay Project 2005 - "STARRY POTTARS"" on 20:36:16 01/01/05 Sat
INT. STARRY'S SPACECRAFT - DAY
Mr. Pottar and Mr. Hart are at the controls now. Mrs. Pottar appears to be navigating. The others are bouncing around in the back, trying to stabilize themselves and perhaps buckle up.
MR. POTTAR
Thanks for bringing him home, Charles.
MR. HART
Not a problem, Petey. I swore I'd keep an eye on him.
MR. POTTAR
What is it you think we're up against this time? Antarans? Pleadins? Nordics?
Mr. Hart motions over to Demon's body.
MR. HART
Did you see that boy there? A cybernetic portal, Petey!
CUT TO: EXT. OUTER SPACE
We see the sun, shining brightly on the Earth. As we zoom around the Earth, we next see the moon. And from behind the moon emerges a gigantic alien spaceship.
The alien ship is a mass of connected tubes, like an enormous french horn in space. It is an elaborate network of curved metal shafts, as if the ship were a work in progress for thousands of years. It is mostly chrome, but with certain areas glowing purple and others glowing green.
While all of this is going on, we continue to hear Mr. Hart and Mr. Pottars conversation.
MR. POTTAR - V.O.(voice over)
But technology like that could only come from one race.
MR. HART - V.O.
That's right. That's while we're getting the hell out of Dodge.
CUT TO:
INT. ALIEN SPACESHIP
We see blackness, and slowly back off to reveal a shiny black eyeball, and then further out to reveal a pale grey alien face.
MR. POTTAR - V.O. (simultaneous to reveal)
Damn... I can't believe it... ZETAS!
We see the Zeta, and he's a classic grey alien. Large oval head, huge black almond shaped eyes. A hint of nostrils, a slit for a mouth. He's got blue coveralls, and is very short - about three feet. He is franticall punching buttons on a console.
WORKER ZETA
Intelligence, our cybernetic portal on the surface has ceased functioning.
The Worker Zeta has a high pitched voice.
Next we see an Intelligence Zeta also working away at several large monitors. Same appearance as Worker Zeta, but taller, about four feet now. He wears orange coveralls and speaks in a voice two octaves lower than the Worker Zeta.
INTELLIGENCE ZETA
Command, the portal is down. The target has been alerted. The remaining Valhavenites are fleeing the planet.
Now we see a Command Zeta - five feet now, silver coveralls. His workstation is of course much larger as well, and his voice is lower still. We are seeing a pattern forming with this society and we have only seen a glimpse so far. We pull back to see a large room like NASA control filled with Command Zetas. Blue worker Zetas come and go around them, filling menial tasks.
COMMAND ZETA
Situation acknowledged. Data is being analyzed. Course of action being determined.
A large monitor in the control room flashes to life. On it is a shot of Earth, with the evacuating spaceships leaving the atmosphere.
COMMAND ZETA
Action has been determined. Attack. Three squadrons, Attack. Attack.
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