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] Date Posted: 12/06/07 22:05 me again. I know i should prob try and put these in the right part of the website, but oh well. i just wanted to share something that I wrote a few weeks ago now. Not meant to be depressing or anything lol just some thoughts on how sometimes its nice to have silence. On a desolate beach By a cliff with tall trees Sits a girl all alone No-one there but the breeze * She leans on the rock With her head in her hand Hair blowing around her Feet burried in sand * The sun moves with ease Across brilliant blue skies It reflects crystaline tears that fall from her eyes * Why feel all this sadness No need really for tears there are reasons to smile If she looks back on her years * Strong winds encourage her To take a small peek She lifts her head slowly Takes her hands from her cheek * The ocean stretches before her Waves lap on the shore She is grateful for life But wants so much more * Why does she feel empty When theres nothing to need She knows she is loved Why does her heart bleed * This soul wrenching ache while continually wishing She could find in her heart That one thing thats missing * You'll find it within So the experts will say Until then you continue to grow lonely each day * She stands up and shakes off the fine golden sand Dries down her tears With the back of her hand * She walks down to the ocean And steps into the wave Water crashes around her Like an icy cold grave * As she stands in the power Of the ebb and the flow It is here she feels peace But knows she must go * Nothings ever accomplished By running away Our fears always find us No matter how far we stray * But there are times we need peace calm and quiet interlude To be alone with your thoughts and the sea's solitude. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Earth-Fire [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13/06/07 8:42 I really liked that, i didn't find it depressing just kind of tells it as it is. Very cool :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: whitewolf [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13/06/07 19:28 I agree with Earth-Fire. Lovely. One for the GG Library? :) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13/06/07 22:07 yeah whitewolf if thats ok. be cool thanks. and thanks earth-fire yeah i guess it is pretty much that, "as it is" hope ya both well [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Pilgrim [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15/06/07 12:03 Very nice, I like it. :-) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: sam spaniel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16/06/07 0:05 very reflective... i can see where you are coming from... brilliant.!! love sam xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21/06/07 16:47 Great. Think many of us have that existential loneliness, that 'what's it all about feeling' - unless you have a very firm and confident faith etc. Which I don't. My path is more a way of life than knowing what it's all about! :) A just get on with it and learn the best we can from things. With plenty of music thrown in to the mix of life. I don't like crowds but am off to glasto some reason having been all my life I love em. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: whitewolf [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21/06/07 17:32 Keep forgetting to ask you Jade - does your poem have a title? (for the Library) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: jade wolf [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22/06/07 13:59 ermm god point whitewolf.. "Ocean solitude" I think thats what i called it before lol I cant remember. I worked at glastonbury 1999, in the circus arena doing escapology events, was great. I dont much like huge crowds but found some cool veggie tents for food, and the chillout zone was cool. i saw david bowie and moby they were cool. so have a great time Mel, its def one for the memory scrap book lol. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |