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Date Posted: 17:23:09 05/16/05 Mon
Author: Go back to school (there are plenty in NYC) (click in...)
Subject: ATTN: COPY CAT MS. UNITED STATE INT'L (YOU NEED SPELLING & GRAMMAR LESSONS)

Here is a sample from your website:
Our pageant consist of two divisions, Ms. 15 -26 and Mrs. 26 and up regardless if you're married or unmarried. Our delegates are young ladies and women who are intelligent, goal-oriented, and role models in their communities.
Delegates who become apart of the Ms. United States Pageant are women who take pride of their nationality, looking to improve their life, and is someone who work hard in letting the world know who they are and what they stand for.


It should read:
Our pageant CONSISTS of two divisions: Ms. ages 15 -26; and Mrs. ages 26 and up. Our delegates are intelligent, goal-oriented, and role models in their communities.

Delegates who become apart of the Ms. United States Pageant take pride of their nationality, look forward to improving their life, and work hard in letting the world know who they are and what they stand for.****NEVER END A SENTENCE IN A FUCKING PREPOSITION***

HOT DAMN - THIS IS JUST TWO PARAGRAPHS ON YOUR WEBSITE. THERE ARE MANY MORE MISTAKES. HOW DO YOU EXPECT TO GET BUSINESS WHEN YOU CAN'T PUT TOGETHER A BASIC FUCKING SENTENCE.

***SHIT, WHILE YOU ARE BUSY COPYING SOMEONE ELSE'S PAGEANT NAME YOU SHOULD COPY THEIR LITERATURE AS WELL! MORON****

***FINALLY HOW IN THE FUCK ARE YOU GOING TO HAVE A MRS. DIVISION - IF MARITAL STATUS DOESN'T MATTER*** FUCKING MORON.

GET YOUR LAWYER TO PROOFREAD YOUR WORK BEFORE YOU PUBLICIZE IT!

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