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Date Posted: 20:04:44 07/17/05 Sun
Author: Casablanca
Subject: in.Casablanca.the.sun.is.shining
In reply to: Mystcal Elegance 's message, "Re: in.Casablanca.the.sun.is.shining" on 17:00:52 07/17/05 Sun


What must be the equivalent to a smile passes across the stallion’s face. He was really beginning to like this mare. “Your explanation is more than sufficient, milady, I am sorry if I have offended you.” He says, his apology genuine. He had been very wrong about her, but if she wanted the position in his harem, his offer still stood. He awaited her decision.
(Ick sorry for the sucky post- I have no muse right now. Better stay back *hands over body suit* I hear this writer’s block stuff is contagious. Anyway, some of the things Mystical mentioned my character never said. He just thought it. Might want to watch that in the future, dialogue is one thing, but what a character thinks is another animal. You can't know what he is thinking. Does that make any sense? I'm very confusing. But please don’t take this the wrong way, just a suggestion!)

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