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Date Posted: 06:41:41 10/18/05 Tue
Author: Renata Oliveira
Subject: Re: Final Draft: Key concepts – Interlanguage
In reply to: Ana Flora Schlindwein 's message, "Final Draft: Key concepts – Interlanguage" on 10:30:01 10/17/05 Mon

Hi Ana,

I think you have structured your paragraphs very well. However I think you should add some connectors to situate your reader better, like "on the other hand", "otherwise", "According to", "In the same way", "To sum up", "to conclude".
Good job!

Renata

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  • Re: Final Draft: Key concepts – Interlanguage -- Kênia Horsts, 17:34:25 10/18/05 Tue
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