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Date Posted: 06:58:58 10/18/05 Tue
Author: Renata Oliveira
Subject: Re: Final draft: The Complexity to Speak English as a Second Language
In reply to: Kęnia Horsts 's message, "Final draft: The Complexity to Speak English as a Second Language" on 18:43:17 10/16/05 Sun

Hi Kęnia,

You have a thesis and you work well on it. However,
I think you should make some changes in you text:

Instead of: Usually here in Brazil, ESL
students face a great oral interaction problem.
"Brazilian ESL students"
Instead of: We are going to see ...
"Producing a second language is complex but some
strategies could be used to improve the hability of speaking English."
Instead of: "the permanence is the
first characteristic and we will approach it now."
>
>Permanence is a characteristic which influences the oral speech. Weigle (2002) states that, “oral language is transitory and must be processed in real time, while written language is permanent and can be read and reread as often as onelikes”. It becomes easier to accomplish a
>better result in the written language before the
>spoken language because you have the time working by
>yourself."
Besides that I think you need to connect your last paragraphs in order to get into a conclusion.

I hope I have helped you a little.
Renata
>

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  • Re: Final draft: The Complexity to Speak English as a Second Language -- Ana Flora, 13:01:57 10/18/05 Tue
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