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Subject: Chapters 12 and 13


Author:
Deborah Brady
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Date Posted: 17:35:10 01/07/07 Sun
In reply to: Debbie Brady 's message, ""Following Your Dreams"" on 14:25:45 09/04/06 Mon

A/N: Sorry for the late post. Hope you like these latest chapters.
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Chapter 12

The stepped onto Abydos and the hairs on everyones back was standing on end. Something was definetely wrong with this picture. Not only was there no one around, they were feeling like that they were being watched.

“O'Neill, I believe we are being watched” Teal'c said in a non-committal tone. He was feeling uneasy and knew that everyone else did too.

“Ya think!” Jack said sarcastically. He hated it when the enemy was just lurking around the corner with out showing themselves.

Aboard the Janet Frasier

“Thor, we have a problem” Daniel Jr. said with concern in his voice.

“What is the problem?” Thor asked.

“I just talked to R'yac at the SGC. My uncles went looking for me as well as Jo's parents. They are on Abydos. They are walking into an ambush. Is there anyway to get them out of there?” Daniel Jr. said with fear in his voice.

“Yes, as soon as they walk another couple of feet” Thor said.

“Which would be....” Daniel Jr. asked. He saw bright light and should've known better.

“Thor, your timing is impecable” Jack exclaimed

“Indeed” Teal'c said.

Mac, Harm, Walker and Jimmy had their mouths open slightly, except Jack, Sam,Daniel, and Teal'c. Jack turned to Sam with a 'do you want to introduce them or you want me to' look. Sam shrugged and then motioned for Jack to go ahead.

“Mac, Harm, Walker and Jimmy this Thor the Supreme Commander of the Asfuard fleet. Thor, Mac, Harm, Walker and Jimmy.”

Thor blinked then said, “Please to meet you.” Then turning to Jack, Thor said “Your daughter is in the bi-bed. Her injuries were severe but the bio-bed is healing them.”

“So, she is going to be ok?” asked Sam with hopefullness in her voice.

“Yes,” answered Thor.

Chapter 13

Jack and Sam wre gratefully relieved that Jo was going to be ok. Then just as fast changed gears.

“Thor, can you bring Catherine Mackenzie Rabb aboard. She should be with Alex and Erica in the SGC.”

Thor moved toward his console to bring up Cat and found something blocking his attempt in bringing her up to the Janet Fraiser.

“I am unable to bring her up.”

“What do you mean you can't bring her up?” Harm and Jack said in unison.

Mac closed her eyes for one brief moment and gasped. She started to sway and before she fell on the bulk head of the ship, Walker and Trivette caughet her. Mac looked right at Harm, anusiating every word she said, “He. Has. My. Baby.”

Jack and Sam looked right at each other and said in unison, “Ba'al”. Sam kinda figured in the back of head that Ba'al was using a force shield.

“He is probably using an inpintrable force shield around the both.” Sam said.

Harm, Mac, Walker, and Trivette looked at Carter like she had two heads.

Jack chuckled at everyone's looks and said, “I look at her like that too when she rattles off her technobabble.”

Sam poked him in the ribs with her elbow.

“Ow! Carter,” said Jack with mock indignation.

With the teasing aside, Harm said, “Is there any way to get her back?”

Thor looked at his control panel and said “Yes.”

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