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Subject: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 15:17:28 10/06/07 Sat

~ Hi everyone, welcome to Muse Mongers first Poetry Challenge


It's called the *1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge*

it just popped into my head :) woo hoo!!! :) lol






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Ok, here's how it goes...


1: The above image is your inspiration for this challenge

2: You must mention 2 flavors in your poem

3: You must mention 3 sounds in your poem

4: You must mention 4 colors in your poem

5: and you must use the 5 words below in your poem



calico

web

superfluous

humid

abounding








....so, show me whatcha got!!!!!




Good luck, everyone...





Sasha xx


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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 20:51:14 10/07/07 Sun

Long forgotten dreams


To the woods she would run,
Amid the humid, towering trees,
Where sanctuary came, vanilla sweet,
Upon her creaking swing of dreams,
Here, away from the calico hell,
Where matrimonial black was worn,
Superfluous to her romantic notions,
Punctuated with blood red attention,
His evil web did not spin here,
Where, love abounding,
She was safe, never forced to yield,
To his self indulgent pounding, -
Now the gentle hand of Nature soothed,
The sweet air, a balm on blackened skin,
As his bitter lemon taste faded from her,
Falling from her tongue,
Into the umber rustle of Autumn’s carpet,
Where her bare feet had journeyed,
Carrying her to her childhood sanctuary,
The silver streak of falling tears,
Soaked her gently floating hem,
Over thighs, once more her own,
Yet she knows she must return,
To where the night knows only fear,
To once more bear the weight of him,
Her heart shut to the squeaking and obscenity,
Of calico hell and long forgotten dreams,



© Paul Osborne 2007

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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
andy spaschak
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Date Posted: 13:23:36 10/08/07 Mon



One - Two - Three - Four Dawn!

In the vanilla morn
out where the abounding sun
sits on a tangerine horizon
reflecting calicos of
yellow, red, and orange
my dreams remain superfluous
in the web of silence where
I hear the bass drums mixing with
the song of trumpet calls of
cadenced rings
that slowly fall
to crescendos

before the humid day
takes its hold


ajs

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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
Sam (Loosed by Chains)
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Date Posted: 06:00:39 10/10/07 Wed


Loosed by Chains

Shame lay humid on her cheek
As sweetened solitude she seeks
Away from daddy’s hellish web

Superfluous bindings of his bed

Knowing there is no escape
Blueblack thighs her nighty drape
Stained red and brown to calico

Abounding in her tortured flow

Let fury drive sweet blinding swing
To rage within, a comfort bring
A moments peace, a stolen breath

A spirit chained, loosed in death


Kumquat crepe or apricot
Free to choose one final thought
A breeze, a rustle, a shortened sigh

As mists enclose her closing eye

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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
tcn
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Date Posted: 06:30:04 10/16/07 Tue

A Gypsy's Kiss


He loved her beneath the shadows
of Pichoca trees where white
palm leaves blew high into the
winds and vanilla vines swirled
and twisted into superfluous webs
of calico threads.

This is where she played on her
swing, suspended barefoot among the
grandeur of rock formations that
labyrinthed to a sheer cliff which
descended into the still waters of
a ghostly lake.

The porous lava of her skin was
carefully woven with the sweet
milk of life given to ghosts in a
dream, where modesty rose like
silence and atoms vibrated into
solid waves of pure color.

Grays and plums drifted across the
sky when they danced among the
eucalyptus that adorned moss covered
stones where the smell of burning sap
from copal trees served as incense
abound in the humid air.

Serenades of gypsy music and gothic
melodies terraced the red caravan with one
voice under the taps of falling rain as
they kissed and sang in the silver
moonlight inspired by Majorca wine and
fried fish served with burned mango.

It was the stuff of poetry!

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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
tcn (revised version)
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Date Posted: 06:47:14 10/16/07 Tue

A Gypsy's Kiss


He loved her beneath the shadows
of Pichoca trees where white
palm leaves blew high into the
winds and vanilla vines swirled
and twisted into superfluous webs
of calico threads.

This is where she played on her
swing, suspended barefoot among
the grandeur of rock formations that
labyrinthed to a sheer cliff, which
descended into the still waters of
a ghostly lake.

The porous lava of her skin was
carefully woven with the sweet
milk of life given to ghosts in a
dream, where modesty rose like
silence and atoms vibrated into
solid waves of pure color.

Grays and plums drifted across the
sky when they danced among the
eucalyptus that adorned moss covered
stones where the smell of burning sap
from copal trees served as incense
abound in the humid air.

Serenades of gypsy music and gothic
melodies terraced the red caravan with
one voice under the taps of falling rain as
they kissed and sang in the silver
moonlight inspired by Majorca wine and
fried fish served with burned mango.

It was the stuff of poetry!

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[> Subject: Re: Welcome to the ~*~1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 Challenge~*~


Author:
tcn (please post this one.)
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Date Posted: 11:47:57 10/16/07 Tue

A Gypsy's Kiss


He loved her beneath the shadows
of Pichoca trees where white
palm leaves blew high into the
winds and vanilla vines swirled
and twisted into superfluous webs
of calico threads.

This is where she played on her
swing, suspended barefoot among
the grandeur of rock formations that
labyrinthed to a sheer cliff, which
descended into the still waters of
a ghostly lake.

The porous lava of her skin was
carefully woven with the sweet
milk of life given to ghosts in a
dream, where modesty rose like
silence and atoms vibrated into
solid waves of pure color.

Grays and plums drifted across the
sky when they danced among the
eucalyptus that adorned moss covered
stones where the smell of burning sap
from copal trees served as incense
abound in the humid air.

Serenades of gypsy music and gothic
melodies terraced the red caravan with
one voice under the taps of falling rain as
the lovers kissed and sang in the silver
moonlight inspired by Majorca wine and
fried fish served with burned mango.

It was the stuff of poetry!

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