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] Date Posted: 03:58:23 11/05/07 Mon  Welcome to the Brand New Challenge, me lovelies... The Cinquain Chain!!! a short poetry form, with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 the image above, is your inspiration, and you are to write a poem with each stanza being in Cinquain form minimum of 3 Conquain/stanza's I just know you will all gift us with some amazing poetry *hugs* Sash xx  [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: tcn [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:01:38 11/05/07 Mon *Never done this one before, hopefully I have it right although it sucks.* Midnight Darkness Vanished Ghostly Companion Sleeps She Will Dream About Her Tonight Waking [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Shalah ((with a feeble attempt)) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:57:36 11/05/07 Mon Reaching desperately toward the outstretched hand. Fingers barely missing flesh on flesh... Again. Moon beams filter softly beautifully deceiving through the curtain of sheerly hung clouds. Futile. If she could only reach into the abyss below. Could she but grasp those fragile fingers... Insight. Inches seperate her from the truth that lies below. She will believe that hand is reaching for her. A leap of childlike faith would shatter the surface. Realities reflection revealed at last. The hand she longs to reach... It was her own outstretched. Sometimes an inch is simply more than space. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jessica (....Dark.) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:18:05 11/06/07 Tue My addition. Tell me whatcha think! Pale girl, don’t scream loudly so-it isn’t a deeper pit than love. The rocks not so sharp, not so lusty for your blood and tears as I, your jealous green lover. The crows not so starved for your flesh as I, the clouds not so eager to enfold and caress and steal away the breath from your fairy lips as I, your torturer, your lover, your devil, your captor, your saviour. Love, scream louder. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jess (Sheepish) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:55:57 11/06/07 Tue I just realised that I have an extra 4 syllable line in there. Ah, well. Imperfection is the soul of beauty. I'll let it stand. Maybe it'll be a new variation hereafter named for me? ;) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:12:39 11/07/07 Wed  ~ Warm Welcomes to the M3, Jessica so lovely to see you take up the challenge :) Andy and Sasha  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:12:03 11/07/07 Wed Well, I think that your poem is just fine. It's filled with both passion and emotion. Poetry is LIFE! Life itself can be quite dark so that means there is room for Dark Poetry. Dark, Light, Evil, Benevolent, Inspirational, Angry, Loving, Seductive, you name it, and you will find countless poems covering it all. Thanks again for joining us. It's our policy to move these poems into our lobby once they are placed here. I will be doing that now. Welcome! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:53:28 11/07/07 Wed Meeting finger whispers, she feels the kiss of ice lost where she lay in dark breathing whimsy Softly chasing ripples unseeing the edged silk that trace where the mist sought her touch, her mind To lie upon earthen, stretched to reach the unknown her words fall to her fingers stiff no more She aches knowing love lost returning to the wet where all is quiet and calm there she cries Hush now, the darkness hunts poised to wrap gray to white lain on the ledge of sanity’s whimsy..... [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:18:14 11/08/07 Thu ~ hey Chris... I've moved your poem to the Lobby, hon just wanted to let you know *hugs* Sash xx  ok, now I'm off to bed..lol . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:22:37 11/08/07 Thu Pool of destiny. Unseen, In the moonlight, She reaches for herself, To keep herself safe from all time, She weeps, The mist, Shrouds her night time, As small tears fall so soft, Into the pool of destiny, Unheard, Ageless, Her reflection, Always reaches for her, Yet if their fingers ever touch, She’ll die, So she, Comes to the pool, Just to admire her past, Forever locked in timeless peace, She smiles. © Paul Osborne 2007. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Shalah [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:53:29 11/10/07 Sat Wow... Paul... I'm loving your interpretation of this! Beautiful!!!!! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:39:48 11/11/07 Sun Mirror, oh Mirror Mirror Oh, my mirror Tell me who I may be Tell me I am the most loved Mirror Deep lake Oh, dear deep lake Show me the real the true Show me the dark and light of life Deep lake Reflect Black cold reflect Watch at my heart and speak Watch and point me to the right path Reflect Mirror Oh, my mirror Tell me who I may be Tell me he is the one and last Mirror. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:38:31 11/17/07 Sat ~ this Challenge is now closed... and you guys totally ROCK!!!!! *hugs* Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |