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Subject: Re: Drenched

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Sasha

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Date Posted: 02:03:17 11/14/07 Wed
In reply to: Janel 's message, "Drenched" on 16:02:58 11/13/07 Tue

Quote:
I closed my eyes tightly
as I slid beneath the surface,
hushing my cries with silence,
listening to the muffled hum
of life on the outside.

~ (((((((((Janel))))))))))

sweetie I remember doing the same thing as a young girl, just to drown it all out....you've captured those thoughts and feelings in such a heartfelt way that the reader cannot help but feel every word.........you rock, sweetie!!!

*kiwi hugs*

Sash xx

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Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:58:41 11/14/07 Wed Thank you so much Sasha, this is exactly what happened too... i wrote it the day after during that time. I appreciate you feeling this, and i appreciate you reading it again. (huggs)