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] Date Posted: 21:48:16 12/02/07 Sun Depth of Hollows Darkness envelopes the moon, devouring all traces of light, a forlorn, melancholic tune plays mysteriously through the night. Trees whisper in agony, suffocating beneath the shadows, they pulsate relentlessly, withering in the depths of hollows. Red lightning streaks through the sky, burning a hole in the atmosphere, echoes of nothingness sighs as the landscape slowly disappears. Beauty becomes black and white, melding life into a mass of gray, oppressive breath of midnight murmurs throughout every passageway. Upon wounded wings withdrawn a sad fairy softly cries, the sorrowful melody plays on, echoing within the depths of her eyes. © jah 8-14-06 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:03:44 12/03/07 Mon Hello Janel The consuming darkness strips you bare and leaves you numb reading through, opressed and lifeless. Such great imagery painted with your words. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:19:45 12/04/07 Tue Thank you so much for the read Max, I appreciate your kind words greatly. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:15:37 12/04/07 Tue bump...Bump....BUmp.....BUMP......this is a melting imagery and pen of a classic and should by rights be at the top for a while DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:20:57 12/04/07 Tue Thank you for the smile Dsl, it means so much to me. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:18:32 12/08/07 Sat ~ this poem could also be about Mother Earth and her tears that fall because mankind's abuse of her, has altered her greatly especially with climate changes and the greenhouse effect beautiful melancholy, dear one...one of your best poems I've read your rhyme and meter is excellent, a deeply moving piece...love it!!!! *warm hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |