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] Date Posted: 09:43:14 12/04/07 Tue These walls The turrets crumbled These great walls that stood the test of time turn to dust Deep inside the black death of horror silently he cursed and mumbled Men swapped swords and arrow for the blood of lust Maidens danced in the fire Dark ash wind swept smoke took the innocents of this past life higher Across the derelict castle ramparts she stood Long blond hair dancing like the white horses of the sea Crystal blue bed me eyes Licking her front teeth she mouthed can you handle me? Never has this soul felt the pain as a spear pierced thy chest A round me man and animal collide with wood and steel To each and every last one of them knows what it is like to have died Whispering loudly can you handle me? Over this battle of life she cried I looked at the end of that spear that had pierced my chest so There was my heart like a victory flag that heart in the wind did blow As the blood dripped from the edges of my mouth I took one last look at her Was there any reason for you to guess the answer? For surely as the castle turn to dust This vision I see of great Beauty before me You know thy answer surely DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:24:31 12/04/07 Tue Wow, this is absolutely outstanding Dsl... your imagery is superb, could truly hear your voice in this. So very well done, i much enjoyed the read. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:28:01 12/05/07 Wed Hi Janel I had many thoughts go through my pen as this all erupted Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:38:38 12/04/07 Tue Mark, Love this, a different timbre and great story. Showing your varied style. Terrific work, Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:25:22 12/05/07 Wed Hi my dear friend I just had a few angles bouncing around in my head that gave me and Idea of a story with in a story that is some what coded, as you know Paul I'm off to Japan for christmas so this will be my last posting until I return in the new year so I'll drop you a line before I go. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:12:58 12/05/07 Wed What a killer write! (No pun intended, either!) Had me sitting on the edge of my seat....damn! I love this! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:49:56 12/05/07 Wed thanking you Christine DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:35:38 12/08/07 Sat Quote: _____________________________ The turrets crumbled These great walls that stood the test of time turn to dust Deep inside the black death of horror silently he cursed and mumbled _____________________________ ~ hey I think I know him Mark, this is such a great piece...love the suspence it has that Braveheart feel to it....well done, my friend *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of Light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:53:41 01/23/08 Wed Hi Sash Something told me you would like this one CHEERS DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |