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Subject: Crushed


Author:
Janel (...crying...)
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Date Posted: 12:30:27 12/04/07 Tue





Crushed


I don't know
what to think
and I don't know
what to say,
I just don't want
to believe it
and yet
the evidence
is staring me
right in
the face.

I am
so confused
and I just
don't
understand,
I can only
shake my head
as I fall
to my knees.

Why?
Tell me
why!?

I want to scream
out loud
and I want to
stomp my feet,
I want to
kick the wall
and I want to
slam the doors,
I'm just
so upset,
so hurt
and crushed.

How could you
do this to me?
How could you
hurt me
like this?

It was
my creation,
my original
work
and yet
you changed it;
added your own
little
details,
that I
would've
never added.

Why?
Tell me
why!?

It's so wrong,
so very wrong,
you cut me deep
and I am
beyond
crushed.

Here I sit
crying,
trying
to make sense
of it all,
but I cannot
and I doubt
I ever will.

I have
nothing left to say,
no words
can express my pain,
for it hurts
so very much,
and I still
just don't
understand
why...

© jah
12-3-07



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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Tammy
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Date Posted: 20:22:51 12/04/07 Tue

((Janel))

My heart is aching with yours. This was
deeply moving and brutally honest, but
that's what makes your spills that more
effective, because they are so real.

Sending hugs, and love,
Tammy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:21:08 12/06/07 Thu

Thank you for feeling this Tammy,
it truly means a lot. huggs

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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 20:39:36 12/04/07 Tue

Janel,

Your pen drips with agony and we all feel it.You write with your heart and soul. Sad as it is I love this,

Peace and love,

Paul.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:24:09 12/06/07 Thu

I'm glad you enjoyed the read Paul,
it helped me to write it out.
I appreciate you muchly.

huggs
janel

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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:31:24 12/05/07 Wed

Ouch! forget the a kiss it better phone for the ambulance.

DSL

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[> [> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:26:28 12/06/07 Thu

Thank you Dsl,
a kiss will definitely
not heal this....tho I so
wish it would.
I appreciate you
taking the time to read me.

Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:05:31 12/05/07 Wed

((((((~Janel~))))))))

Whoa....this hurts DEEP

*Sigh*

Excellent pain, loving heart...

~Hugs~

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[> [> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:27:31 12/06/07 Thu

Thank you Christine (huggs)

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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Eric
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Date Posted: 21:21:22 12/07/07 Fri

Still devastating to read, my sweet friend.

*Squeezes warmly*

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[> [> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:40:20 12/07/07 Fri

(Squeezes warmly back)

Thank you so very much sweet dragon friend,
it means a lot to me...truly.

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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 19:27:06 12/08/07 Sat


Quote:
___________________________

It was
my creation,
my original
work
and yet
you changed it;
added your own
little
details,
that I
would've
never added.

Why?
Tell me
why!?
__________________________


~ ohhh nooo that would be awful...

(((((((((((healing hugs to take away the pain)))))))))))

a deeply emotive piece, one can't help but feel it deeply

*love 'n' hugs*

Sash xx





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[> Subject: Re: Crushed


Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 16:25:33 12/10/07 Mon

Hello Janel

When someone takes something from us, something so precious, especially wrought from the hands of our own creating, it cuts deep, and your words so passionately capture that.

In awe of your emotive stance.

Max

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