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Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 20:57:18 11/16/07 Fri

when i bleed, it�s my flesh pierced
in knots and tears weeping,
not yours

crushed in barbs led by another�s
tongue and i hold myself tightly
knowing that it�s better this way;
you cannot save me

i refuse you

let me lay here to wallow
singing in the moonlight of my woes
and heartaches

i am immortalized

my own words bathe each
hole in acidity and putrify my soul

it�s my pain�....
mine, i tell you
why should i share it
when i have kept it all these years?

i want this�...
without it, i am not lost
and waiting�.

� TR

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek

Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 09:34:41 11/17/07 Sat

Oh, I so undertand this one!

Don't share it, hold on to it
after all you worked so long
and hard to make it your own.

That's the mindset that I have
sometimes regarding the same issues.

Healthy or not, we izz what we izz!

Enjoyed your darkness!

You insomniac maniac you!

zooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmm

andy

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek

Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 17:03:02 11/17/07 Sat

Quote:
when i bleed, it�s my flesh pierced
in knots and tears weeping,
not yours

crushed in barbs led by another�s
tongue and i hold myself tightly

~ ooooooh that is an awesome opening to this, Chris...

the strength of your poetic voice doesn't let up throughout this poem, and that, my friend, is a good thing....love this!!!

*hugs*

Sash xx

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek

Author:
thesongman
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Date Posted: 18:37:11 11/30/07 Fri

I can only say excellent, Not to belittle anyone's words and thoughts, but the best piece I have read tonight.

Bill

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek

Author:
kristen.
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Date Posted: 18:31:47 01/07/08 Mon

this speaks to me christine, at the most profound levels. you awed me with this piece, truly.

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 09:34:41 11/17/07 Sat Oh, I so undertand this one! Don't share it, hold on to it after all you worked so long and hard to make it your own. That's the mindset that I have sometimes regarding the same issues. Healthy or not, we izz what we izz! Enjoyed your darkness! You insomniac maniac you! zooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmm andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek
Author: thesongman [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 18:37:11 11/30/07 Fri I can only say excellent, Not to belittle anyone's words and thoughts, but the best piece I have read tonight. Bill [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek
Author: kristen. [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 18:31:47 01/07/08 Mon this speaks to me christine, at the most profound levels. you awed me with this piece, truly. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]