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] Date Posted: 20:15:51 10/18/07 Thu . Here it is his gateway to hell and home he is one of the forgotten... a broken man ghost-like in his bitter skin huddled in the shadows of neon clutching his only worldly treasure with trembling hands in fingerless gloves we’re careful as we step over him... while his whiskey breath pries open the chilly night and he tries to form his aching words between shivers he reads her so tenderly... with bloodshot eyes and cracked stinging lips his clothes, as dirty and tattered as his heart and he relives a time before death a time before existing a time before surviving his one true love before whiskey and we glance back, one last time... as we walk down the stairs to our jobs and our homes to our comfort he weeps as he reads her in postcards from Paris they’re all he has left... © Sasha ‘06 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:05:52 01/14/08 Mon What a tender poetic expression of life as less than intended and lost dreams. You shivered my spine here Sash. Wonderful poetry that lifts off the page. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:44:39 01/17/08 Thu ~ ((((((Andz)))))) you are a treasure! this one was a picture challenge piece... the picture was of the Gateway to the London Underground Railway and I envisioned a homeless man sitting there, as I've described in this poem...it pretty much just wrote itself... or maybe I just got out of the way for a while, till it was done...he he thank you for visiting me here, hon *kiwi hugs* Sash xx ![]() [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |