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Subject: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:29:57 01/06/08 Sun

Catch me


Listen
to the beating
of my heart,
do you hear
the ache
that dwells
within?

Look
into the depths
of my eyes,
do you see
the tears
bleeding
rivers?

Swim
through the echoes
of my soul,
can you feel
the sadness
overwhelming
my spirit?

Observe
the trembling
of my lips,
can you tell
I'm about
to crash upon
my knees?

Harken
the rhythm
of my breathing,
do you hear
the sorrow
in my
sighs?

Then please,
please, catch me,
hold me,
protect me,
surround me
and embrace me
with your warmth and love.

For right now
it hurts
deep within,
the darkness
is devouring me
and I'm fighting
to see the light.

I'm so
beyond stressed
and I feel
so depressed,
my heart cries
and the tears
continuously fall.

It's been
one of those days,
or rather one
of those weeks,
it just doesn't
take much
to bring me down.

I get
into these moods
and I just
want to cry,
in these moments
I am lost
in tears.

Still,
I know someone
sees me
and I know
someone hears me,
yes I know
I am far from alone.

So please,
please, catch me,
hold me,
protect me,
surround me
and embrace me
with your warmth and love.

© jah
1-6-08


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Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 22:32:05 01/06/08 Sun

Very emotional write, Janel.
Enjoyed.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:02:25 01/10/08 Thu

Thank you for the read Arun, I much appreciate it.

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 11:14:49 01/07/08 Mon

By the time you've finished reading this one you should have your coat on and be half way out the door to the rescue.

DSL

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:03:07 01/10/08 Thu

Thank you Dsl, it means much to me.

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 12:52:15 01/07/08 Mon

emotive pen done well.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:04:03 01/10/08 Thu

Thank you Mick.

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 18:07:48 01/07/08 Mon

All I can do from here is give you these
((((Janel)))
This one gets the reader in the heart my friend.
Enjoyed the journey done the road your muse led.
Great to read you again!!

Smiles!
Bobby

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:05:05 01/10/08 Thu

It's good to read you again too Bobby,
thank you so much. (huggs)

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 20:21:10 01/07/08 Mon

Ok, ready, One, Two, Three, JUMP!

I'll catch you any time sweet one.

Sorry to hear that you are having a bit
of a struggle but, remember there are
many of us who love you for who and
what you are.

Which is a loving, caring, talented,
beautiful, woman.

much love,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:07:38 01/10/08 Thu

Andy,
you catching me makes
all the difference in the world,
thank you so very much dear heart,
your words truly warmed and
touched my heart. (Huggs)

Much love to you,
Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 21:03:09 01/07/08 Mon



Quote:
_____________________

It's been
one of those days,
or rather one
of those weeks,
_____________________

~ oh I hear ya, sweetie

in fact, it's been one of those years! for many people...

your heart ink pours so beautifully to the page, Janel...

(((((((((((((warmth and love))))))))))))))

Sash xx


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Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:08:47 01/10/08 Thu

Yeah, it sure has.

Thank you sweet Sasha,
it truly means a lot to me.

huggs
janel

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 20:27:04 01/08/08 Tue

I can hear the echoes of the child within your aching heart.
Open arms will catch you and bring you back . . . of this I'm sure, Janel. Your poem touches a place many experience and you express it so well.
Sunshine and roses to you!
Wilopent

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Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:10:20 01/10/08 Thu

You are a dear Wilopent,
thank you so much.

Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 03:27:37 01/09/08 Wed

Janel,

This poem showcases your supreme talent my friend, Please remember that you are loved,maybe not the relationship kind sadly, but the love of friends is what keeps us bouyant and you will always float high!

Love and hugs,

Paul.

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Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:12:08 01/10/08 Thu

Paul,
your kind and heartfelt words
truly mean a lot to me.
Thank you so much my friend.

Huggs and love,
Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
AnneMarie
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Date Posted: 13:19:21 01/10/08 Thu

Oh if my arms were a safety net...I so wanted to reach out and catch you. The emotional depth of this is supreme. Big, big hugs and much love. You have beauty and much talent.

Hugs & Kisses,
AnneMarie

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[> [> Subject: Re: Catch me


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:13:11 01/10/08 Thu

Thank you AnneMarie,
I truly appreciate it muchly.

Huggs,
Janel

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