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] Date Posted: 07:05:33 01/29/08 Tue  Open the Window My Muse is a child today hiding under a tree out there in my garden. Lonely child I have not heeded her call to come out and play. For that she will not speak to me in words and I will have to look into her eyes and watch her dance. Fool that I am safe behind the window pane safe behind my mask of self-sufficiency. Fool that I am open the window and let her in these old bones are in need of a good tumble! [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:34:18 01/29/08 Tue Excellent, Wilopent. That's great write. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:03:11 01/29/08 Tue Hello Wilopent This is just brimming with energy, and childish mischeviousness, even while ignoring her calls. There are days when my real world stops me playing with my muse, and she goes awol for days afterwards. Loved this. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:52:00 01/29/08 Tue Enjoyed this specialy the end sentence brought the poem together for me DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:29:20 01/29/08 Tue Thank you so much for your comments, Arunansu, Max and DSL. Glad you enjoyed my write. Peace and happy musings to all! xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:00:06 01/29/08 Tue You know these muse poems are wonderful. I told Sash and another person not so long ago that if you can't find you muse then write about not being able to find it. It's such a strange thing to many that it seems to come and go. For me I have to get myself out of the way and I have various methods of doing just that. There are waves of energy that flow through all of us and it's an uncanny and undefinable thing that we all experience. I love these poems because they touch on something that anyone who loves to write can relate to. Well done, window and all! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:15:31 01/30/08 Wed Yes, Andy, The energy and pull to write does come in waves. I've always felt that. I used to wait for the big ones, but as I've gotten older, I find my muse often tiptoes in on the ripplets, the little splashes and sprinkles, and if I jump in . . . even the shallow water seems full of life. Thank you! Hugs, Wilo [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:48:36 01/29/08 Tue This is awesome. Very great at depicting the muse for sure...great read. Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:34:13 01/30/08 Wed Thanks AnneMarie! Appreciate your kind words! xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:07:05 01/29/08 Tue I'm so loving this Wilopent, can truly understand it and i absolutely adore the image. Wonderfully done my friend. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:36:23 01/30/08 Wed Thank you Janel. So glad you liked it. xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:42:43 01/29/08 Tue So many times my muse has gone hiding, and we move between missing each other and being glad for the space. Truly a delightful read Wilopent, my little girl (inside) claps, nudges me and says 'see? PLAY WITH ME'. I tell her 'in a garden with fae of peacock feather wings, and a butterfly dragon? sure why not! but not those other dark worlds you want to drag me to, not yet. So there you go, you inspired me lol ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:39:06 01/30/08 Wed Your words ring true, Lily. Thanks for your input. Don't you just love the little Imp when she wants to play? xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:38:48 01/30/08 Wed Quote: _____________________________ these old bones are in need of a good tumble! _____________________________ ~ oh I hear ya, Joanne... *smiles* this is such a beautiful piece, that just floats with grace down the page your words drift and flutter on the gentle breeze I so love this one...beautifully expressed, dear one *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:41:14 01/30/08 Wed Thank you Sasha dear, You cheer me on as always! Hugs, Joanne [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:04:58 01/30/08 Wed (((~Wilopent~))) The muse is fickle, childish, and oh so very much a hard taskmaster/mistress at times, eh? We run and jump to catch up, most of the time we fall down...but it's the journey of growth along the way that inspires us all....excellent write, excellent capture! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:44:06 01/30/08 Wed So true . .so true,Christine. You know the deal when it comes to that elusive little muse. She is a patient little thing though . . . no? xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |