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] Date Posted: 01:39:41 01/22/08 Tue And THESE tears that fall? THESE tears! They are raindrops from the heart cascading down precursor to this spent loves storm They fall entwined with painful memories memories of a loves so carefree calm They carry mocking inevitablility as a smarting sting oblivious of a dying loves ressurection call they are the most hurtful kind shed, embedded a sparkle that is the realisation of loves fall they are the last the last I shall ever shed for you be it for an eternity they flow on And THESE words that scorn? THESE words! They are acrimoniously tainted pertinatious things eradicating from my mind any hope forlorn they are dignity's minions set to protect Protect me from the lament of loves fall They are a melancholic pride's makeshift guize an illusive face hiding intense emotions that boil they are the most hurtful kind said, embedded a wall against the perplexing love that is their scorn they are the last the last I shall ever say to you be it for an eternity they roll on (C) Max Hardy 1986 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:11:33 01/22/08 Tue An unleashing of the heart here. I could feel the undercurrent of emotion while reading. It's a very powerful write you have left here for us. When it needs to be said there is no better way than to say it with a poem. Well done! best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:02:33 01/24/08 Thu Hello Andy Thanks so much for your insight. A first real love, many years ago now, but the memories linger. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:50:54 01/22/08 Tue Okay, sniff, sniff, you make me cry. Very intense emotions, awesome write. Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:04:18 01/24/08 Thu Hello AnneMarie Tis a blubberfest indeed, but twas a long while ago now. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your kind words. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:51:47 01/22/08 Tue Very powerful, emotional write Max, am feeling it very deeply. (huggs) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:06:31 01/24/08 Thu Hello Janel Thanks so much for stopping by. There were a lot of intense emotions flying when I wrote this all those years ago, and their memories still linger in the scar tissue. Your words warm my heart. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:25:08 01/22/08 Tue Wonderful release Max. Your words resonate with the many that have been there. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:07:56 01/24/08 Thu Hello Mick Thanks so much for stopping by. A great release indeed, and one we have all lived through at one time (two times, three times.........) or another. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:42:14 01/23/08 Wed Hi Max If you wrote this in pencil the lead must of brocken a few times and then you had to rewrite this one as the paper fell apart wrecked by the tears. If you typed it straight to computer I wouldn't be surprised if the key board is wrecked the screen has shorted out. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:09:46 01/24/08 Thu Hello DSL My friend, back in the day when I wrote this it was quill and parchment, and the feathers did indeed stick together and the ink smudge so terriblie, forsooth. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:06:46 01/23/08 Wed Max, This is one of the finest poems on the pain of lost love I think I have ever read.Painful yet enjoyable at the same time, you wield a mighty pen my friend. Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:37:27 01/28/08 Mon Hello Paul Thank you so, so much for those wonderful comments, they do so warm my heart, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:07:58 01/24/08 Thu Awesome and oh so true words, Max. Indeed, tears from lover's eyes are that all feelings and statements. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:39:07 01/28/08 Mon Hello Mireille Thanks so much for stopping by and for your wonderful comments. Tears are just that, and hold the emotions of our souls in each and every drop. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |