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] Date Posted: 19:59:39 01/06/08 Sun they taste a lot like lithium, your lies (those exquisite, spun sugar untruths that don’t sound enough like silence) my ear drinks them in like need let me try again. they feel like silk Yes. luxurious and slippery exquisite and opaque (best when naked) I revel best in your fictions your lies your lying tongue succumb best to your fancies your arts your artisan hands relax best in the empty in the negative spaces in the addictive moments when you whisper and whisper and whisper and say nothing [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:32:40 01/06/08 Sun Jess, This one is carved out with a unique and well crafted style. Impressive poem! Absolutely love the close. Hell, I love the whole poem but, you get my point. Keep on pushin' that pen hot stuff! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:07:53 01/06/08 Sun This is truly beautiful Jess, sighs my heart softly... love it immensely. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:57:57 01/07/08 Mon Powerful and moving piece! Enjoyed the spill, especially liked this strophe... "luxurious and slippery exquisite and opaque (best when naked)" Smiles! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:33:29 01/07/08 Mon Quote: ___________________________________ my ear drinks them in like need let me try again. they feel like silk Yes. luxurious and slippery exquisite and opaque (best when naked) ___________________________________  ~ oh Jess... this is excellent!!! and how true your words, sometimes we know they're lies, but try to convince ourselves otherwise...so sad really... I'll be back to this one shortly LOVE this!!!! *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:51:30 01/08/08 Tue  dear Jess, this poem called me back I've read it several times now, and it totally rocks!!!! CONGRATULATIONS on this most deserved award, dear one I'm hanging this one up in the Muse Mongers Hall of Fame!!!  *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jessica [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:53:01 01/08/08 Tue Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:59:14 01/08/08 Tue Hello Jess Those damn lies entice in sweet filigree. Emotions so wonderfully captured with verve. Excellent. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:46:30 01/27/08 Sun  Read of the Day 27th January, 2008 Chosen by Sasha CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear Jess your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!  *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:08:30 01/28/08 Mon Jessica, Oh Jessica, Congratulations on the award and the ROTD selection. Stopped in for read number two and I have to say the way this poem reads (as a result of the layout) reminds me how important line breaks and space can be when posting a poem. So very well done. So much for your missing muse! LOL best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |