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] Date Posted: 15:03:39 01/20/08 Sun To her, your incisive blame For visible consequences Carved on her flesh by disease Obviously, she surely desired Losing her hair long ago cherished, Or wearing-enduring a dark beard You can't imagine, living this extra or lack You are certain, yes, she must have wanted And grow it up to keep it at her back. You never feel any shame Pointing your mocking finger Instead of some nice or tender If you had, heart or mind Any thing of (that) kind. NO, you're ironic laughter Is certainly better help(h)er A sharp knife to erase This little sparkle in her eyes. It's always-ever the same You shoot straight her heart She ought to forgive the dart Don't you hear in her silence Her praise for disappearance "Please, stop your invisible arrow, It reaches me before I foresaw You sent them, your rant's your bow" Yes, please, World, forget I'm different Agree me to be part of the round Where each shoe has its foot. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:01:08 01/20/08 Sun Quote: _____________________________ Yes, please, World, forget I'm different Agree me to be part of the round Where each shoe has its foot. _____________________________ ~ what an awesome message you gift us, and the world, dear Mireille I love this poem because it speaks to me and for me... and I just know that it will touch anyone who reads it... I'm coming back to this one for sure *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:38:54 01/21/08 Mon Well, I guess it's easier and more intense delivery when the message is meant and truly lived. Your words touched me, Sash, thank you. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:01:49 01/21/08 Mon Mir, I enjoy your voice always. You don't dance around things. Instead you go right at the core of what you are after and express yourself quite often profoundly. I love the close here. It keeps the reader in the poem after the readings done. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:41:07 01/21/08 Mon Well they're my thoughts and I don't see any reason I don't express them, plus, they're my personal scream, my release. And if the reader keeps in mind these words, I'm truly glad. Thank you so so very much dear. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:19:22 01/21/08 Mon powerful pen. concur the end line resonates. much enjoyed. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:02:28 01/24/08 Thu I'm always very careful to my endings lines.. they're very important. Thanks a lot, Mick [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:30:03 01/22/08 Tue Oh my, what a mind blowing poem Mimi, reading this is a lead filled stomache and water over head for too long, breathless. A most powerful piece. (((Mimi))) Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:03:34 01/24/08 Thu Thank you very much sweet Bobby.. that was meant to touch, indeed. *hugs* [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:03:37 01/22/08 Tue I am feeling this Mireille, you express yourself so very well. This touched me my friend. (hugs) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:04:30 01/24/08 Thu Thank you very much Janel.. I knew you'd be moved, you're too sweet. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:42:13 01/25/08 Fri Mireille, The many colours of your heart, bleed onto the page with such passion and skill, you never disappoint my friend, Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:19:32 02/03/08 Sun Thank you so so very much, Paul, you truly humble me. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:38:14 01/26/08 Sat Yep definitely tuggin at the heart here... beautiful write Mireille. I love this! Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:20:19 02/03/08 Sun Thank you Anne Marie, pleased you liked this work. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |