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] Date Posted: 21:57:24 01/18/08 Fri Needles And The Pen Face distorted against a primordial window, struggling to escape - to survive. An opaque perspective, ambiguous, but alive. Death is dead. It ain’t poetic - a brain starving to survive. Dying is indescribable. I tried. Needles and the pen keep this wannabe alive. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:19:16 01/19/08 Sat your strong he feels friend Mick potent write this be tell him more bout the story behind this story hope this finds you well [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:28:05 01/19/08 Sat The forces that push us to survive against everything are the strongest. Different for everyone, when they're no more, death comes more easily. Powerful scribe, Mick. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jess [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:40:55 01/19/08 Sat "Dying is indescribable. I tried." That really struck me golden, so it pleases me to award you today. You moved me! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:56:31 01/19/08 Sat Very powerful writing Mick, am feeling it. Congrats on the award! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:10:05 01/20/08 Sun I applaud this one. I love fearless poetry that sits out on the edge of common thoughts. This is thought provoking and very much larger than it appears on the page. Glad to see Jess awarded it. best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:52:57 01/20/08 Sun Very powerful, and haunting...and worthy of the award! Such depth beneath the layers...I read this one several times...very nice! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:53:44 01/20/08 Sun Quote: ________________________________ It ain’t poetic - a brain starving to survive. Dying is indescribable. I tried. ________________________________ ~ oh WOW! oh this is haunting, indeed, Mick Jess did a fine job awarding this piece...I love it!!! I've been a fan of yours since I first read you and this is an excellent example of why your poem is now hanging proudly in the Muse Mongers Awards Hall *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:09:38 01/21/08 Mon Y'all are too kind. Thanks for the award and kind review - puts a smile on my face. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:10:31 01/22/08 Tue Hello Mick This does hit hard, and speaks volumes beyond the words. Congrats on the award, your subtly overt verse always resonates way after reading. Loved this. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |