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] Date Posted: 15:43:22 01/17/08 Thu The mighty trees stood in the copse, The lumberjacks close by, Revving of their chainsaws, Janel could not believe her eyes, “No! No! Not the lovely trees!” The Lumberjacks just glared, At the poetess who pleaded, That the Mighty Oaks be spared, The whirring chains soon ravaged, The Bark so old and worn, Ruthless in their terror, Of the gaping wound so torn, The lumberjack was careless though, As he turned to scratch his head, The mighty oak gave one last ‘CRACK!’ Then it squashed the scoundrel Dead! Janel then danced a little jig, Her joy it did abound, As all the others tried to dig, The lumberjack from the ground, So the moral of this little tale? Let the buzz saws now be hushed, For when the fall of Nature comes, The might of man - will be crushed, © Paul Osborne 2008 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:43:22 01/17/08 Thu Oh Paul... I don't know what to say, I'm jus smiling so big after reading this and i feel all warm and fuzzy inside, you've truly touched my heart my friend, thank you so very much for writing this, truly was a wonderful surprise to come here and find this awaiting me. I absolutely love it, have read it twice. :) Will you join me in this dance? *smiles* Huggs and love, Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:40:04 01/18/08 Fri Great write, Paul. The ending is terrific. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:50:38 01/18/08 Fri A very nice response to Janel's work, Paul. I'd just add that on next spring a new oak will start to show it's growing better. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:07:41 01/18/08 Fri Janel, Heehee, what a dance eh? You in your lovely garland and flowing gown and me in my wellies and outdoor clothes! LOL It would be a pleasure, and maybe we could plant a new tree of friendship ...what ya say? LOL. Smiling that you like this, Love and hugs back, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:44:15 01/18/08 Fri Sounds good to me Paul. :) (huggs) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:09:58 01/18/08 Fri Arunansu, That you continue to enjoy my work is a treat. I too enjoyed the ending and the way it came to me,before I had even started was a bonus too! Peace and hope, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:11:57 01/18/08 Fri Mireille, I raise a glass to all new trees my friend, may they be forever poetic, Love and hugs, paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |