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] Date Posted: 04:53:12 01/13/08 Sun 360 Degrees They say take care of your prayer It may be answered The thoughts that are in your head They can be seen as read Then I met you The room revolved at three hundred and sixty degrees My eyes couldn’t believe What the heart can always sees The room just kept spinning around you at three hundred and sixty degrees When we had parted This was no end As I knew that we had only just started And in you I had found a friend The ins and the outs Are not so easy to comprehend May be I’m thinking too hard Everything was so easy Not the future It’s the past That scares me Why should we care? After all what’s out there? We stood still Every started to turn three hundred and sixty Degrees Not the time for insecurities Enjoy live this life Run with me If I don’t beg Ever heard of a the word please If the room stops turning My heart will keep burning The memory of you Will be listed under beautiful………for ever DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:00:04 01/13/08 Sun The euphoria is a wonderful, natural high. And it is true, those encounters are never forgotten. Enjoyed this pen DSL. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:03:43 01/14/08 Mon Hi Mick I'm pleased you enjoyed this one DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:50:22 01/13/08 Sun The memory of you Will be listed under beautiful………for ever DSL _________________________________________________ Timing and fate play so much of a role always! Nice read. I especially love the close. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:06:06 01/14/08 Mon Hi Andy Pleased you like the ending as I was not too sure of it at the time. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:23:21 01/13/08 Sun "May be I’m thinking too hard" ~ oh I know that feeling, Mark... sometimes we do just that, over think things that in itself can spin a person or situation around 360 ;) much enjoyed this one, my friend *hugs* Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:10:27 01/14/08 Mon Hi Sash As you know this little romantic poem is all about meeting some one and the feelings the thoughts that follow and our hearts and minds do tend to go into over drive it's then you start to think did that happen did they say this ect ect, Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:20:28 01/14/08 Mon Hey you made turn by 720 degrees. Great write! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:06:25 01/14/08 Mon Arunansu you are too kind.......and i'm still spinning DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |