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Subject: 360 Degrees


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 04:53:12 01/13/08 Sun

360 Degrees

They say take care of your prayer
It may be answered
The thoughts that are in your head
They can be seen as read

Then I met you
The room revolved at three hundred and sixty degrees
My eyes couldn’t believe
What the heart can always sees
The room just kept spinning around you at three hundred and sixty degrees

When we had parted
This was no end
As I knew that we had only just started
And in you I had found a friend
The ins and the outs
Are not so easy to comprehend

May be I’m thinking too hard
Everything was so easy
Not the future
It’s the past
That scares me
Why should we care?
After all what’s out there?
We stood still
Every started to turn three hundred and sixty
Degrees
Not the time for insecurities
Enjoy live this life
Run with me
If I don’t beg
Ever heard of a the word please

If the room stops turning
My heart will keep burning
The memory of you
Will be listed under beautiful………for ever

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 08:00:04 01/13/08 Sun

The euphoria is a wonderful, natural high. And it is true, those encounters are never forgotten. Enjoyed this pen DSL.

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[> [> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:03:43 01/14/08 Mon

Hi Mick

I'm pleased you enjoyed this one

DSL

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Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 14:50:22 01/13/08 Sun

The memory of you
Will be listed under beautiful………for ever

DSL

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Timing and fate play so much of a role always!

Nice read. I especially love the close.

thanks,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:06:06 01/14/08 Mon

Hi Andy

Pleased you like the ending as I was not too sure of it at the time.

DSL

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Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 20:23:21 01/13/08 Sun

"May be I’m thinking too hard"

~ oh I know that feeling, Mark...

sometimes we do just that, over think things
that in itself can spin a person or situation around 360 ;)

much enjoyed this one, my friend

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:10:27 01/14/08 Mon

Hi Sash

As you know this little romantic poem is all about meeting some one and the feelings the thoughts that follow and our hearts and minds do tend to go into over drive it's then you start to think did that happen did they say this ect ect,

Cheers

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 01:20:28 01/14/08 Mon

Hey you made turn by 720 degrees. Great write!

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[> [> Subject: Re: 360 Degrees


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 05:06:25 01/14/08 Mon

Arunansu you are too kind.......and i'm still spinning

DSL

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