Re: Task 5 - part B -- UFSJ INTERACION 2008

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Subject: Re: Task 5 - part B

Author:
Willer (Hi Delton Mendes)

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Date Posted: 21:23:35 05/25/08 Sun
In reply to: Willer 's message, "Re: Task 5 - part B" on 21:01:53 05/25/08 Sun

Tell me something about Vinte mil léguas submarinas. Why this book had change part of your life? Are you afraid of ocean or of water? I'm just joking. When I was eleven years old I did'd even think about reading. It is nice that you like reading since long time ago. How does the story start? What had the people of the submarine have to do?

About the mistakes:

Insteado of: "Between all books that I read, is really dificult choose one."
I would say: It is difficult to chose one among the books I've already read. OR Almong all books I've already read, I think it is difficult to chose one to be the best.

When you said it is impossible to say the best, I think it would be better saying: it is impossible to say which/what was the best

And about "It´s so sadness to Nemo Captain, and to readers"

Maybe you should say It was so sad to Captain Nemo and to the readers...

But afterall, you text was realy great. I don't see mistakes in your text I just give you some tips to you!

Bye!!

Willer

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