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Date Posted: 19:05:23 05/12/02 Sun
Author: Frost Bite
Subject: *The mare lied down...*
In reply to: Frost Bite 's message, "*An angry mare looked at Sandstorm...*" on 14:19:03 05/12/02 Sun

*The once pure white mare, with her silvery mane and tail, lied down in the cover of dense forest. Her once white and sleek coat was ripped and torn. Blood was everywere, her coat was stained red and her black eyes were surrounded by a thick band of white. Her ears were tipped back to her skull as she rested her head on the grass. She breathed in and out slowly. She feared she was to not live much longer. She was very week and was loosing alot of blood. She tried to whinnie as loudly as she could but blood sputtered out and all that came out was a low sigh. She was so scared. She was so scared that the creatures would come back...come back to finish her off. She was scared that she wouldnt make it. She was scared that if she did, Sandstorm would abandone her and take the other mare as his Queen. She was scared that Sandstorm would leave her for Cub and that she would be left with nothing, but the dead carcus of Sun Broke. The stallion that would have watched over her and saved her from the creatures that rippe her flesh and gave her so much pain. She stopped thinking about that for a moment and thought about how deep her love for Sandstorm was. How when the first time she saw him her heart exploded with love for him at first site, and how he expressed his love like a true stallion. Her breathing got heaver and her blood started to stop pooring forth. Her eyes felt as though they were rolling in the back of her head. She stuck her legs out from her lying sideways positiong. They stuck out like thorns and then her oval hoofs pawed the dirt sending it everywere. Her life was coming to an end. She could feel her last breath coming. She could feel her heart slowing down. The mare made an ear piercing scream. A terrified echoing dieing scream. She stretched her head and neck out and started to bob her head up and down from its restful position. She stopped abruptly stoped moving. Her breathing stopped. Her heart stoped. Her last movement was the closing of her eyes. She started to go into another world...*
*Suddenly out from the pond that rest in the middle of the tt. The cool water craweled out in a large long clump. It crawled across the grass leaving a small thin stream of silver dew on the grass. It finally reached over to the mare went sucking through her flared breathless nostrils. It sqwerted up and went through her whole body and veins.*
*The mares body started to shake and quiver. Her eyes flashed open and her heart started to beat strongly again.*
*Silver mist and water floated around the once dead and limp body. It swirled into a small tornado form which cast all around her. The mare stood up ubruptly and a bright star shined on her forehead. All you could hear was a loud stinging noise which sounded much like a high pitch scream. The star rose from her head and a clear sparkling obect went piercing through her forelock. It glinted and shined brightly.*
*Frost shook her now white silky and sleek body. Her silvery mane and tail wavered around her and clashed against her rump and her muscular arched neck. She held her head tall and high. A silver wet mist pouring out from her clear sparkling horn. The mares dark eyes sparkle and glinted in the nights sky. She lifted her head high and reached out her slender legs and lashed her oval hoofs at the air. She made a piercing whinnie for her stallion...her true love...her true King...Sandstorm. She whinnied again and kept high in her tall arched postition. Silver dew and ice crystals cracked and formed all around her. Her long silvery tail swhished and smacked her rump. Her ears were tipped forward and alert for her true love Sandstorm. She didnt know how she had done it, but somehow she had turned herself into a Unicorn. Her clear horn sparkled and glinted brightly. She whinnied again, still outstretched and pawing her hoofs into the now thicking misty air. Her long horn pinatrated the mist and sent a glowing light all around her. She was much more beautiful than before. Her and Sandstorm made the perfect loving King and Queen. She couldnt wait for him to see her new form. She landed softly on the ground and crackling ice shattered befor her. Her coat twitched a little and the sleekness of it shinned. She wanted to say how sorry she was to her stallion for worrying about not being the Queen. She knew she wouldnt have to worry about it anymore. She was a Unicorn and Frost Bite and Sandstorm would be together forever...*

(her horn is invisable)

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*stares in amazment* -- Sandstorm, 07:57:02 05/14/02 Tue
- *Frost Bite arched her long neck...* -- Frost Bite, 22:15:39 05/15/02 Wed
- o, yes Frost, and we might as well wright a nover while we're at it! (NT) -- Erin, 06:24:11 05/26/02 Sun