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Date Posted: 14:29:09 03/13/11 Sun
Author: Tânia
Subject: Task 6 revision

Hi everybody.

I have read about our final paper for task 6 posted by Ludimila.

Although she has asked us to review and add something , I could not do it because all we have discussed is there.

I didn’t find any mistakes. I just noticed a missing letter in the following from the text posted.

Paragra ph 07: as well as help them to develop (not - as well as help the to develop)

Another point of view is that it would sound and express the idea better if we use “first conditional” instead of “second” and ” will “ instead of “would” in some places. See the following.

If possible, and if time allowed we would show them the video made by Teacher Joe… (Mila’s)

If possible, and if time allows we will show them the video made by Teacher Joe… (my suggestion)

Second step we would ask them to create and keep… (Mila’s)

Second step we will ask them to create and keep… (my suggestion)

PS:It is just my idea and we will change something just if you guys agree.

Tânia da Consolação Martins Pereira

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