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Date Posted: 20:33:23 10/02/12 Tue
Author: Comicality
Subject: Comicality's Review Of "GFD: Nomad" By LemonFresh

Hehehe, "You're a Judas, Jesus!" LOL! I love that line....

Now this is what I can clearly say is the work of an evolving artist. The stories keep improving, and "GFD: Nomad", while only in it's first chapter, is proof that LemonFresh is here to stay. It's not over done, it's not under done, the characters are well defined, the background and mood is set...it's the sign of true growth in an author's writing. I have to say that I'm impressed.

The story involves a vampire who is on the run, and is hiding out in South America, where he was hoping to leave his old life behind. Apparently, in this chapter, his location has been compromised, and a few 'agents' (Alexis and Ian) have come to bring him back to the states. The 'why' hasn't been revealed yet, but it is tied in to the fact that he has an ability that may cause others to mistake him for a vampire Mimic. And it is tied in with a few familiar names from the "GFD" series. So the story is set up for some great twists and possibilities ahead from the get go, and it only promises to get better from here.

I'm definitely intrigued by the set up and eager to read more. So even though the story is only one chapter deep right now, it has a lot of potential to become the roller coaster ride that LemonFresh is becoming known for! So excellent work, dude! You just keep getting better!

As it should be! :)

You can find "GFD: Nomad" at http://www.gayauthors.org/story/LemonFresh/gfdnomad/1! And on the GFD: Blood Bank later this week!

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