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Date Posted: 02:23:53 02/20/01 Tue
Author: Trent Black
Author Host/IP: tgtel131.eastky.net /
Subject: Nice imagery and substance.
In reply to: sarah 's message, "A poem, your comments please!!!!! (thankyou)" on 17:38:40 01/11/01 Thu

Your use of sensations is great. Tying them to the actions and emotions really adds to the stability of the poem.

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  • Re: A poem, your comments please!!!!! (thankyou) -- Krista, 21:38:47 11/24/01 Sat
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