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Date Posted: 20:07:34 06/28/01 Thu
Author: Jay V
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 204.143.165.116
Subject: Sweat

it's a short one. it's also a first draft

SWEAT

It's one of those days
When I just sit and
wish ... that I may
see you again.

It is bright outside
Sun there, and in here
My soda cup is
sweating.

Its cold droplets fall
onto the counter
I wipe it all up
Why did our love go?

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Re: Sweat -- elizgoo, 07:22:12 06/29/01 Fri