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Date Posted: 02:29:48 02/20/01 Tue
Author: Trent Black
Author Host/IP: tgtel131.eastky.net / 208.135.167.131
Subject: Request critiques!!!

In this poem, I tried to transfer a computer virus into human emotion and reflect the insanity of moder life. Please tell me what you think.

"Awake Tonight"

Ran into Jenny yesterday,
Had Monkey-B in a box on the 6:15,
From Oak Lawn Eastbound.
Reminded me that it’s been a while,
Since I enjoyed another’s feel..
Awake tonight on a trojan, multi-platform,
Memory-resident, self-extracting,
Multi-collision, cookie-injected depression,
Hell, I almost feel so fake I’m real.
I power down,
And go outside,
To look at the pretty, giant,
Flat world turning round,
And looking back.

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